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I will beta read fantasy, romance beta reader, beta reader memoir, horror thriller
Alpha Beta Reading, Developmental Beta Reader, Manuscript Critique
I’m Hawthorne, a self-publishing expert with years of experience helping authors bring their ideal vision to life. From the writing process to editing, book design, and publishing, my publishing house...
About this Gig
Are you looking for someone who will genuinely connect with your story, understand your characters, and help you see your manuscript from a readers perspective?
Hi, I'm Hawthorne, a professional beta reader and editor who is passionate about helping writers bring their stories to life.
I specialise in beta reading for dark romance, fantasy, memoir, contemporary fiction, and emotional, character-driven stories. I focus on the overall reading experience, including character development, emotional depth, pacing, plot, dialogue, relationships, and story flow.
My goal is to give you thoughtful, honest feedback that highlights whats working, identifies areas that may need improvement, and helps you strengthen your manuscript while staying true to your unique voice.
WHAT I OFFER
- Plot and story flow feedback
- Pacing and chapter-by-chapter feedback
- Dialogue and relationship feedback
- World-building feedback
- Detailed beta reading feedback
- Honest and constructive reader feedback
Genres I Love to Read
- Dark Romance
- Fantasy
- Contemporary Fiction
- Memoir
- Emotional Fiction
- Psychological Fiction
- Romance
- Literary Fiction
- Mystery & Thriller
Contact me now so as to get started
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What file format should I send my manuscript in?
You can send your manuscript as a Word document, PDF, or another commonly used format. If you have a preferred format, feel free to ask before placing your order.
Will you rewrite or edit my manuscript for me?
My service focuses on beta reading and reader-focused feedback rather than rewriting your story. I’ll point out areas that may need attention and explain how they affect the reading experience.
Can you beta read an unfinished manuscript?
Yes, depending on how complete the manuscript is. If it is missing major sections or an ending, please contact me first so we can make sure the service is suitable for your project.
Is your feedback suitable for first-time authors?
Yes. I provide honest but constructive feedback designed to help you understand your manuscript from a reader’s perspective, regardless of your level of writing experience.
