I will read your script and offer real feedback

Send me your pilot or feature, and I'll give you the same kind of notes I give my own scripts. I'm not interested in nitpicking every line or pretending there's only one "right" way to write. I want to help you make your script the best version of itself so you can actually try and break into the industry. How do you go from your living room to the writer's room? There's not a single, direct path, but paying for coverage that only wants you to buy more coverage is NOT the best use of your time.

I'll tell you what grabbed me, what lost me, where the characters shine, where they need more work, and whether I'd keep reading if this landed in my inbox. Because let's be real, when showrunners or executives receive scripts, they get about 500 at a time. You might get 3-10 pages to hook them. With this coverage, you'll get real, honest feedback and actual suggestions you can use in your next draft, to hopefully increase the value of your product.

The goal is simple: help you write a script that people can't put down and will get you noticed.

I generally accept action, thriller, comedy, fantasy, sci-fi, dramedies, rom-coms and dramas.