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Lily Freeman
@lilyfreemanedit
Publishing Standard Manuscript Feedback, Beta Read
United Kingdom
English, Greek, Czech, French
About me
I'm Lily, a professional beta reader and book editor with a degree in English Literature and editorial experience at HarperCollins, one of the world's Big Five publishing houses. I’ve reviewed manuscripts with a focus on structure, character development, pacing, and emotional impact. I give clear, honest feedback that helps authors strengthen their stories while protecting their voice. If you’re serious about improving your manuscript, I’m here to help you move it closer to publishable standard.
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Work experience
Freelance Editor & Beta Reader
Fiverr • Self-employed
Jan 2026 - Present • 4 mos
Delivering professional beta reading, proofreading, and manuscript critique services to independent authors via Fiverr. Provide structured, actionable feedback on plot, character development, pacing, and line-level editing. Maintain a client-focused approach to help authors achieve publishable standards while preserving their unique voice.
Writing Group Facilitator & Critique Partner Company
Self-Help • Self-employed
Sep 2023 - Present • 2 yrs 8 mos
Participated in and facilitated peer critique sessions within a writing group, offering constructive line-level and structural feedback on works-in-progress. Helped writers identify weaknesses in narrative flow, dialogue, and character motivation.
Freelance Editor & Proofreader Company
Freelancer.com • Self-employed
Mar 2023 - Present • 3 yrs 2 mos
Provided editorial and proofreading services to independent authors across multiple fiction and non-fiction projects. Delivered detailed feedback on structure, pacing, grammar, and consistency. Worked directly with clients to meet publishing-standard expectations while preserving each author's unique voice.
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dark_izak
Repeat Client
South Africa
If I move forward with my writing, or even get published anywhere and it goes forward, I Will always use Lilly thank to her for everything
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campaignm
United States
Outstanding experience! Very professional, fast communication, and excellent service. Delivered exactly as promised with great quality and attention to detail. Highly recommended Will definitely work again in the future. Thank you!
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mark7358
United States
I’m so grateful for the care Ms. Lily put into my novel. She didn’t just skim it; she gave me a deep, thoughtful dive with feedback that was both specific and genuinely helpful. She pointed out exactly where my characters needed focus while still highlighting the parts she loved. If you're looking for...
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charis62
Australia
Lily was an amazing beta reader! Her feedback was thoughtful, generous, and genuinely engaged with both the characters and the world of the story. The in-line notes were especially helpful and showed how carefully she’d read the manuscript from start to finish. She has a great instinct for character...
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dark_izak
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South Africa
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