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Melissa K. is unavailable until Nov 9, 2026
“I'm out of office due to a family matter. I'll be back on Monday. ”
I will developmental edit your picture book or children story
Gig Summary
Developmental Editor, Writer, and Writing Coach
Hi, I'm Melissa! I'm a Developmental Editor and Writing Mentor.
I specialize in giving detailed editorial critiques, line-editing, proofreading, and self-publication for Children's Books, Young Adul...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
robert_garofal
United States
Melissa provided thoughtful and helpful feedback on the pacing of my manuscript. She clearly read the story carefully, recognized its heart and characters,...
robert_garofal
United States
Melissa provided thoughtful, detailed feedback on my children’s book manuscript. She recognized Robert’s personality and humor while offering specific suggestions...
robert_garofal
United States
Melissa’s detailed feedback and guidance have helped me strengthen my manuscript and grow as a writer. She explains her suggestions clearly, identifies what’s...
selinapatricia
United Kingdom
It was a pleasure working with Melissa. She demonstrated a genuine understanding of my children’s book and the sensitive subject matter. Her feedback was thoughtful,...
robert_garofal
United States
Melissa provides thorough, specific feedback and takes the time to explain her suggestions clearly. Her guidance has helped me strengthen my story’s structure,...
About this Gig
** PLEASE CONTACT ME BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER **
You've written your story, now what? Whether you're publishing Traditionally or pursuing Self-Publishing, I'll help get your manuscript organized and to a finished product to send to an agent, publisher, or to progress to publish yourself.
What I Offer:
- Constructive Feedback. Detailed in-text edits, marginal comments and an overall review written at the end.
- Checking Word Choices. Review age-appropriateness, that words are at the correct reading-level. If you're unsure what reading-level your story is, I can let you know.
- This is only a critique. More services listed below.
Additional Services:
- Proofreading & Line Editing. I'll do a critique first (additional cost).
- Book Layout Info. Questions about the front and back matter?
- Art Directions. Questions about hiring an illustrator? Please note: I don't write art directions, but I'll critique them (additional cost).
- Illustration Critique. I'll critique a mock-up of your book, offering advice on the illustrations and layout (additional cost).
**For Chapter Books, please message me for a custom order.
Have a question? Message me! It'd be a pleasure to hear from you. =)
Language:
English
Content type:
Generic
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do You Offer Free Revisions?
Regretfully, I do not. I charge per manuscript. If you would like for me to look over another draft of your manuscript, it requires a new order.
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R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provided thoughtful and helpful feedback on the pacing of my manuscript. She clearly read the story carefully, recognized its heart and characters, and pointed out specific areas where the pacing and story development could be strengthened. Her observations gave me a clearer understanding of...
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provided thoughtful, detailed feedback on my children’s book manuscript. She recognized Robert’s personality and humor while offering specific suggestions to strengthen his motivation and the story’s direction. Her comments clearly explained both what was working and what needed attention. I...
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa’s detailed feedback and guidance have helped me strengthen my manuscript and grow as a writer. She explains her suggestions clearly, identifies what’s working, and shows where the story needs more attention. Thank you, Melissa, for all your help, encouragement, and the care you’ve given my story. I look forward to continuing to work with you.
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?S selinapatricia
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationIt was a pleasure working with Melissa. She demonstrated a genuine understanding of my children’s book and the sensitive subject matter. Her feedback was thoughtful, constructive and encouraging, helping me see where the story could be strengthened while preserving its heart and message. Melissa was...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provides thorough, specific feedback and takes the time to explain her suggestions clearly. Her guidance has helped me strengthen my story’s structure, develop the characters, and clarify the world for young readers. I appreciate her patience, thoughtful communication, and collaborative approach....
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
182 reviews for this Gig
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| (2) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provided thoughtful and helpful feedback on the pacing of my manuscript. She clearly read the story carefully, recognized its heart and characters, and pointed out specific areas where the pacing and story development could be strengthened. Her observations gave me a clearer understanding of...
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provided thoughtful, detailed feedback on my children’s book manuscript. She recognized Robert’s personality and humor while offering specific suggestions to strengthen his motivation and the story’s direction. Her comments clearly explained both what was working and what needed attention. I...
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa’s detailed feedback and guidance have helped me strengthen my manuscript and grow as a writer. She explains her suggestions clearly, identifies what’s working, and shows where the story needs more attention. Thank you, Melissa, for all your help, encouragement, and the care you’ve given my story. I look forward to continuing to work with you.
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?S selinapatricia
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationIt was a pleasure working with Melissa. She demonstrated a genuine understanding of my children’s book and the sensitive subject matter. Her feedback was thoughtful, constructive and encouraging, helping me see where the story could be strengthened while preserving its heart and message. Melissa was...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R robert_garofal
United States
Ongoing collaborationMelissa provides thorough, specific feedback and takes the time to explain her suggestions clearly. Her guidance has helped me strengthen my story’s structure, develop the characters, and clarify the world for young readers. I appreciate her patience, thoughtful communication, and collaborative approach....
$50-$100
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
