I will developmental edit your fiction novel with detailed feedback

I provide a detailed developmental critique focused on improving your manuscript's overall reading experience. I review plot structure, pacing, character development, dialogue, consistency, scene effectiveness, world-building (when applicable), and reader engagement.

You'll receive constructive feedback identifying strengths, weaknesses, plot holes, confusing sections, and actionable suggestions to strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice.

Included:

Developmental manuscript review

Plot, pacing, and character analysis

Story structure feedback

Editorial summary with recommendations

Not Included:

Proofreading or grammar correction

Copy or line editing

Rewriting, ghostwriting, or formatting

Fact checking or plagiarism checks

This service provides professional feedback and recommendations only. All creative decisions remain with the author. Any work outside the purchased package or manuscript word count requires a new order or a gig extra