I will be developmental editor for your novel
Expert Book Editor for Novels
About this Gig
Is your novel finished but still not as strong as you know it can be? I'll help you uncover what's working, what's holding it back, and how to strengthen the manuscript without taking away your voice.
I'm a book editor specializing in developmental editing for novels, including romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, and literary fiction. I focus on plot and story structure, pacing, character development, dialogue, chapter flow, conflict, tension, consistency, point of view, themes, and narrative coherence.
You'll receive practical feedback that explains what needs improvement, why it matters, and how to strengthen it. Depending on your package, you can receive in-manuscript comments, chapter-by-chapter feedback, and an editorial letter covering the strengths, weaknesses, and revision priorities.
I don't rewrite your novel into my voice. My goal is to make your story more compelling, clear, and engaging while protecting your unique writing style.
Choose my developmental editing service for honest, constructive feedback that treats your manuscript as a story, not just a collection of sentences.
Let's turn your draft into a stronger novel readers will want to keep reading.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What will I receive with your developmental editing service?
Depending on the package you choose, you may receive in-manuscript comments, chapter-by-chapter feedback, an editorial letter, and practical revision suggestions. Each package clearly explains what is included.
Will you rewrite my novel or change my writing style?
No. I focus on strengthening your manuscript while preserving your unique author voice, tone, ideas, and storytelling style. My feedback is designed to help you make informed revision decisions.
What genres do you work with?
I work with various fiction genres, including romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, literary fiction, contemporary fiction, and more. If you're unsure whether your genre is a good fit, you can contact me before ordering.
Is developmental editing the same as proofreading?
No. Developmental editing focuses on the story and big-picture problems, while proofreading focuses mainly on final errors such as spelling, punctuation, grammar, and typos. Developmental editing should generally come before proofreading.
Does my novel need to be complete before I order?
A completed manuscript is usually best for a full developmental edit because I can evaluate the entire story. However, I can also provide developmental feedback on partial manuscripts depending on your needs.
Can I send you my manuscript before ordering?
Yes. You're welcome to contact me with your manuscript details, word count, genre, and specific concerns so I can understand what your book needs and recommend the appropriate package.
Do you use AI to edit my manuscript?
No. I do not use AI to perform the editing of your manuscript. Your book receives careful human editing and feedback based on your story, writing style, characters, and intended audience.

