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Lucas Thorne

@lucasthornes

Professional Beta Reader And Manuscript Analyst

United States
English, French
About me
Hello! I'm Lucas, a dedicated story analyst and beta reader specializing in fiction manuscripts. Over the years, I have helped independent authors refine their pacing, polish character arcs, and fix critical plot holes before publishing. My approach combines the honest reaction of an avid reader with the structural analysis required to keep readers turning pages. Whether you write high fantasy, gripping thrillers, or contemporary romance, I provide constructive, actionable feedback to elevate your voice. Let’s collaborate to make your manuscript the absolute best it can be!... Read more

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Beta Reading
I will beta read your book or manuscript
From$40 / projectMore details
Beta Reading
I will beta read, critique, and provide feedback on your book manuscript
From$30 / projectMore details

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Work experience

Self_Employed

Freelance Beta Reader & Story Consultant

Self Employed • Freelance

Feb 2022 - Present • 4 yrs 4 mos

Provided comprehensive manuscript evaluations and detailed reader reports for over 40 indie authors across various fiction genres. Evaluated plot structure, pacing, dialogue authenticity, and character development. Consistently delivered actionable feedback that helped authors successfully transition from rough drafts to polished, market-ready self-published novels.