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I will critique your novel and provide development feedback
Professional Beta Reader And Manuscript Analyst
Hello! I'm Lucas, a dedicated story analyst and beta reader specializing in fiction manuscripts. Over the years, I have helped independent authors refine their pacing, polish character arcs, and fix c...
About this Gig
Hey there!
I'm Lucas Thorne, a dedicated beta reader and developmental critique specialist.
Have you finished your novel but aren't sure if the story is working as well as it could?
Do you want honest feedback on your plot, pacing, characters, structure, and overall reader experience?
You've come to the right place!
What I can help with:
- Plot and story structure
- Character development
- Pacing and story flow
- Plot holes and inconsistencies
- Reader engagement
- Strengths and weak points
- Clear, actionable feedback
- Detailed reader reports
Why work with me?
- Honest, constructive feedback
- Detail-oriented reading
- Reader-focused perspective
- Professional communication
- Your manuscript is treated with care and confidentiality
Ready to strengthen your novel?
Send me your manuscript and requirements, and I'll carefully review your work and provide feedback you can actually use.
Please message me before ordering so we can make sure the package is right for your manuscript.
Language:
English
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French
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is a developmental critique?
A developmental critique looks at the bigger picture of your story, including plot, pacing, characters, structure, consistency, and overall reader experience. I'll highlight strengths and areas that could be improved with clear, actionable feedback.
What genres do you accept?
I currently accept literary fiction, mystery, romance, and fantasy. If you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit, feel free to message me before ordering.
Do you proofread or copyedit?
No. This gig focuses primarily on developmental feedback and reader perspective, rather than detailed proofreading or copyediting.
What will I receive?
You'll receive thoughtful feedback based on your selected package, including a reader report and, where included, sample line edits. My goal is to give you useful feedback you can apply to strengthen your manuscript
Can you identify plot holes and pacing problems?
Yes. I'll pay close attention to plot logic, pacing, story flow, character development, and areas where the manuscript may become confusing or lose reader engagement.
Can I message you before placing an order?
Absolutely! I encourage you to message me first with your word count, genre, and any specific concerns. I'll help you choose the package that best fits your manuscript.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
Yes. I respect the privacy of your work and will treat your manuscript and personal information with care and confidentiality.
