I will beta read romance beta reader fantasy beta reader, thriller scifi beta reader

United States

I speak English

An Experience beta reader and book editor

Hello, My name is Lois Danieli, I'm a professional book editor, beta reader, and also help with book publishing, with my vast years of experience in this field, i have assisted lots of individuals, co...
About this Gig

Your manuscript is finished. But will a real reader feel what you want them to feel?


That is the question I want to answer.


I offer thoughtful beta reading and reader feedback for romance, fantasy, thriller, and sci-fi fiction. I don't simply read through your manuscript and tell you that it's good. I pay attention to the experience of reading it where I became invested, where the story slowed down, which characters stood out, what confused me, and which moments made me want to keep turning the page.


WHAT I LOOK FOR;


ROMANCE; chemistry, emotional connection, character motivations, relationship development, pacing, tension, and whether the romance feels believable.

FANTASY; world-building, character arcs, magic systems, lore, pacing, and whether the fictional world is easy to understand without overwhelming the reader.

THRILLER; suspense, tension, twists, clues, pacing, stakes, and whether the story creates enough curiosity to keep the reader guessing.

SCI-FI; world-building, technology or scientific concepts, character development, plot logic, pacing, and how naturally the reader understands the unfamiliar elements.


Let's read it like a reader, not just like an editor.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Humor/ entertainment

Romance

Science

Language:

English

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