I will write a developmental editorial report
Polished Books Clear Writing Better Results
About this Gig
Hook
Not sure if your manuscript is ready? Get honest feedback on what works, what doesnt, and how to fix it before you spend money on editing or publishing.
What I do
I am a professional book editor. I read your full manuscript and write a clear developmental report on structure, pacing, flow, characters or argument, and overall impact, with a practical plan for your next draft.
What I offer
- Written editorial report (2 to 10 pages)
- Strengths and weaknesses overview
- Feedback on structure, pacing and flow
- Character or argument feedback
- Chapter-by-chapter notes (Premium)
- Next-draft action plan
- Report only: no line-by-line edits
People I work for
Authors of fiction and nonfiction, including memoirs, self-help, Christian books and biographies.
Brand I work for
Independent authors, first-time writers, ministry leaders, coaches, and small publishers who want their books to be clear, polished, and ready for readers.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What is a developmental editorial report?
It’s a written assessment of your manuscript’s big-picture strengths and weaknesses: structure, pacing, flow, characters or argument, and overall impact. It ends with a practical plan for your next draft.
Will you edit my manuscript?
No. This gig gives you a written report with my feedback and advice, and I do not make changes or leave comments inside your manuscript.
Do you read my whole manuscript?
Yes. I read the full manuscript, up to the word limit of your package, before writing the report, so my feedback reflects the whole book and not just a sample.
What will the report include?
A strengths and weaknesses overview, feedback on structure, pacing and flow, character or argument notes, and an action plan for your next draft. Premium also includes chapter-by-chapter notes.
What file format will I receive?
You’ll get your report as a PDF or Word document, whichever you prefer. Tell me when you order, and I’ll deliver it in that format.
What file format should I send?
Send your manuscript as a Word document (.docx), or share a Google Docs link with access for me. Please send the full, most recent draft so my feedback is accurate.
What types of books do you review?
I review fiction and nonfiction, including memoirs, self-help, Christian books and biographies. Message me before ordering if you’re unsure whether your project fits.
My manuscript is longer than the package. What should I do?
Choose the package that fits your word count, or add the “Additional words” extra. For a very long manuscript, message me and I’ll send a custom offer.
How do revisions work?
A revision means I clarify my feedback or answer follow-up questions about the report. It doesn’t include re-reading a rewritten manuscript. You can buy an additional revision as an extra.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
Yes. Your manuscript stays private. I never share it, publish it or use it for any purpose other than your report.

