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I will beta read, critique dark romance, sci fi, historical, horror beta reader fantasy
BETA READING AND BOOK EDITING
Hi, I’m Lyra, a professional beta reader and book editor passionate about helping authors refine and elevate their manuscripts. I specialize in beta reading, developmental editing, and manuscript crit...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
wildflowerdays
United States
Wonderful experience. She was professional and very responsive, and her feedback was thoughtful, organized, and helpful. I appreciated the care she brought...
bnbianchi
Brazil
Working with Lyra was a highly satisfying experience. She delivered precisely what was requested and exceeded my expectations on attention to detail. The constructive...
bnbianchi
Brazil
Amazing to work one more time with Lyra. She delivered exactly what I needed and gave a honest and precise feedback. I am looking forward to keep working with her.
london_biv
Germany
Working with Lyra was great! he feedback was spot on and will definitely help improve my manuscript. I would definitely work with her again!
About this Gig
Hey there!
Hi! I'm a passionate beta reader and alpha reading specialist who loves tearing into stories (nicely, I promise). I help authors polish plots, fix pacing, and strengthen characters across dark romance, historical romance, YA dystopian, fantasy, and mystery thriller. Whether you need a beta reader for fresh eyes or alpha reading for early drafts, I bring clarity, insight, and humour to every page.
Services I Offer
- Beta reading
- Alpha reading
- Chapter-by-chapter feedback
- Pacing analysis
- Plot critique
- Character feedback
- First chapter critique
- Worldbuilding feedback
Why Me?
- 100% human feedback (no AI)
- Reader reaction + emotional notes
- What works / what doesn't
If you want a reliable beta reader, expert alpha reading, and feedback tailored to romance, scifi, dystopian, fantasy, or mystery thriller, let's make your book unforgettable.
Contact me now!!!
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
How detailed is your feedback?
I provide clear, actionable feedback that highlights strengths, identifies areas for improvement, and helps elevate your story without changing your unique voice.
Can you help improve my synopsis for submissions or marketing?
Absolutely! I refine your synopsis to be concise, engaging, and impactful, making it more likely to grab the attention of agents, publishers, or producers.
Is your service suitable for all genres?
Yes! From drama and comedy to thriller, romance, or speculative fiction, I adapt my guidance to fit the style, tone, and audience of your work.
How can your service help me prepare for professional submissions?
By refining structure, pacing, and clarity, your manuscript or script becomes polished and professional, giving you a strong advantage when submitting to publishers, agents, or producers.
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W wildflowerdays
United States
Wonderful experience. She was professional and very responsive, and her feedback was thoughtful, organized, and helpful. I appreciated the care she brought to the manuscript and would definitely recommend her to other writers looking for a positive, professional beta reader.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?B 
bnbianchi
Repeat Client
Brazil
Working with Lyra was a highly satisfying experience. She delivered precisely what was requested and exceeded my expectations on attention to detail. The constructive feedback provided was much valuable to my work and I surely would request her service again.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bnbianchi
Repeat Client
Brazil
Amazing to work one more time with Lyra. She delivered exactly what I needed and gave a honest and precise feedback. I am looking forward to keep working with her.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L london_biv
Germany
Working with Lyra was great! he feedback was spot on and will definitely help improve my manuscript. I would definitely work with her again!
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
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Helpful?R rickdemi
Repeat Client
United States
As usual, excellent work. Very helpful.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
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W wildflowerdays
United States
Wonderful experience. She was professional and very responsive, and her feedback was thoughtful, organized, and helpful. I appreciated the care she brought to the manuscript and would definitely recommend her to other writers looking for a positive, professional beta reader.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?B bnbianchi
Repeat Client
Brazil
Working with Lyra was a highly satisfying experience. She delivered precisely what was requested and exceeded my expectations on attention to detail. The constructive feedback provided was much valuable to my work and I surely would request her service again.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bnbianchi
Repeat Client
Brazil
Amazing to work one more time with Lyra. She delivered exactly what I needed and gave a honest and precise feedback. I am looking forward to keep working with her.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L london_biv
Germany
Working with Lyra was great! he feedback was spot on and will definitely help improve my manuscript. I would definitely work with her again!
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
L Seller's Response
Helpful?R rickdemi
Repeat Client
United States
As usual, excellent work. Very helpful.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
