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I will beta read your litrpg novel
Gig Summary
Born in California and raised in Louisiana, I've been writing fantasy stories for decades. I've studied languages and history, and know more about the world of isekai webnovels than I'd care to admit.
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
huntermcdona368
United States
Could tell Sadie actually went through and read every line, rather than rely on AI etc to provide feedback. She found several helpful areas where I could improve...
doseoftea
United States
Fabulous attention to detail. Caught many things that slipped past me despite my many rereads. Greatly appreciate the honesty. My writing every sentence as...
michaelk178
United States
Cool kid as always. I recommend sitting at her lunch table. You would think losing the kid who shoots milk out of his eye would have caused societal collapse for the scene but really its not all that missed.
dexjo21
United States
I have worked with Sadie in the past and now after multiple projects can definitively say that I love working with her! She is friendly, professional, and efficient...
About this Gig
Does your story have a System?
If your answer is yes, I'm the reader for you!
If not, I can read your story and give opinions anyway!
A beta reader is someone who takes the story you lovingly typed out with blood, sweat, and tears, and points out everything wrong. And the good things, too! If any given sentence sparks an emotion, I will tell you! I'll also tell you what I think of the story as a whole, and if I think it has a chance to be the next big hit...
No editing, no proofreading, just opinions!
Contact me before ordering to make sure you have the right gig and I have the availability!
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between a beta reader and an alpha reader?
An alpha reader reads as the story is being written, giving opinions as each chapter is completed. A beta reader takes the whole, completed manuscript and not only gives opinions, but checks for consistency and marketability as well.
What formats do you accept?
Anything that can be opened with Microsoft Word. Or a Google Docs link.
What if my story is longer than 55k words?
If you plan on publishing to RoyalRoad.com, I'll accept up to 55,555 words (that's what their contest requires). If you have less than 100 words over the limit for any package, I'll take it no worries. Anything else, tell me the number and I'll send you a custom offer.
What's a "Revision" in this context?
Imagine this: You give me your manuscript. I read it and mention that, mostly, your orcs speak like toothless Alabamans, but the orc in Chapter 17 speaks like a normal person. A day later you send a revised chapter back to me, and I happily check the revised dialogue for proper hick-ness.
Have you published anything so I can check you're legit?
Why in fact I have! The title of my story is: Reincarnated into a Time-Loop Dungeon as a LVL 100 Catgirl Chef! If the title alone doesn't show that I know LitRPGs, I don't know what will.
Reviews
49 reviews for this Gig
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H huntermcdona368
United States
Could tell Sadie actually went through and read every line, rather than rely on AI etc to provide feedback. She found several helpful areas where I could improve clarity of the story (especially RE character backgrounds) and caught some issues with plausibility for an infiltration scene. Overall super helpful, and great value for the work.
$50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?D doseoftea
United States
Fabulous attention to detail. Caught many things that slipped past me despite my many rereads. Greatly appreciate the honesty. My writing every sentence as its own paragraph ticked her off😅, but that’s how you know she’s honest in her compliments as well. Will make sure my next work is paragraphed appropriately...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?M 
michaelk178
United States
Cool kid as always. I recommend sitting at her lunch table. You would think losing the kid who shoots milk out of his eye would have caused societal collapse for the scene but really its not all that missed.
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?D dexjo21
United States
I have worked with Sadie in the past and now after multiple projects can definitively say that I love working with her! She is friendly, professional, and efficient with her work. I would definitely recommend working with her, and I’m sure I’ll be reaching out to her again in the future.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?P pwork2026
United States
Fast turnaround, good match for the genre, careful reading. Thank you, Sadie.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
49 reviews for this Gig
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| (1) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (1) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
H huntermcdona368
United States
Could tell Sadie actually went through and read every line, rather than rely on AI etc to provide feedback. She found several helpful areas where I could improve clarity of the story (especially RE character backgrounds) and caught some issues with plausibility for an infiltration scene. Overall super helpful, and great value for the work.
$50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?D doseoftea
United States
Fabulous attention to detail. Caught many things that slipped past me despite my many rereads. Greatly appreciate the honesty. My writing every sentence as its own paragraph ticked her off😅, but that’s how you know she’s honest in her compliments as well. Will make sure my next work is paragraphed appropriately...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?M michaelk178
United States
Cool kid as always. I recommend sitting at her lunch table. You would think losing the kid who shoots milk out of his eye would have caused societal collapse for the scene but really its not all that missed.
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?D dexjo21
United States
I have worked with Sadie in the past and now after multiple projects can definitively say that I love working with her! She is friendly, professional, and efficient with her work. I would definitely recommend working with her, and I’m sure I’ll be reaching out to her again in the future.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?P pwork2026
United States
Fast turnaround, good match for the genre, careful reading. Thank you, Sadie.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?
