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I will beta read your romance novel
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
For shorter works, I have a separate gig, which is also more affordable. Longer works take more out of me.
I've been an avid reader for more than a decade. I'm also in multiple reader groups on social media, to stay up-to-date with trends and other readers' sentiments.
Gig: Beta Reading with Inline comments and a Reader Report.
I give my honest initial reactions through inline comments and provide a reader report after a full read.
For inline comments, I like to sprinkle in notes that sound like a friend reacting to the story or characters. I think it helps verify if the scene achieves its intended impact.
The reader report answers the questions below. If you have other questions, please feel free to message me!
- Was I bored in any part of the story?
- - Were there parts or chapters where I wanted more? How was the overall pacing of the story?
- Were there any parts or chapters where I was confused?
- Was the overall story satisfying?
- Did I understand where the characters were coming from? Were the main character arcs satisfying?
- What genre/subgenre did I feel the story fell into?
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do check for typos/grammar/spelling mistakes?
I always highlight all mistakes I find through an in-line comment. I also highlight repetitive words. But my focus would be on the overall flow of the story.
What kind of feedback do you provide?
I focus more on developmental/manuscript critique style of feedback. - When the main character did/said [plot point], the main character came off... - In Chapter 1, the main character reacted like ... but in the middle of the story he ... It felt out of character.
Do you accept incomplete stories?
Yes. Please let me know so I can take it into consideration while reading. I’d also prefer it you could provide questions or specify areas you want feedback on.
Favorite Tropes
Love grumpy/sunshine, soft spot for her, jealous/possessive hero, and will burn the world down for her.
Do you have any triggers?
Yes. I avoid books with on-page detailed sexual abuse and/or animal abuse, but I'm okay if it's off-page or not detailed. I avoid reading racist and/or sexist main characters, especially if it's the main point of view the story is told.
