I will be your favorite beta reader

You've written it, reread it so many times you can't see the text anymore. That's where I come in!

As a beta reader, I read your story as a reader but with a notebook in hand. I'm not hunting for misplaced commas, I'll tell you what hooked me, what stalled, where the tension dropped, which character didn't convince me, and on what page I nearly closed the file.

My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.

What you get

• Comments throughout the read, chapter by chapter: real-time reactions, questions, predictions, and where I lost the thread
• A final report analyzing plot, pacing, character development, internal consistency, dialogue, and setting
• Your strengths highlighted knowing what's already working is part of the service too
• Notes on any specific concerns you've raised about your manuscript

Honest feedback isn't cruel feedback. My commitment is to tell you the truth about what isn't working, always in service of the story you want to tell not the one I would write.

Confidentiality guaranteed. Your manuscript isn't shared with anyone.