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I will be your suspense or fiction beta reader and critique with inline comments
Gig Summary
'Turning ideas, manuscripts, and stories into polished books'
Book Editor | Fiction Beta Reader | Ghostwriter
With 15+ years of reading, analyzing, and reviewing stories, I've developed a keen eye for transforming manuscripts into publication-ready books. Backe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
artghose
United States
She does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
linc_powers
United States
Mariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript...
mikaeladodson
United States
All good and appreciate Mariya's help in helping craft my novel. We are working through it in chunks, and seems to be working well. My first novel, so a learning...
mizzy5
United Kingdom
Excellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her...
About this Gig
Hi, I'm Maria..
As an English Grammar Expert, literature reviewer, and enthusiastic reader, I am skilled in providing a detailed and natural feedback along with inline comments. I also provide with alternative dialogue suggestions that are often LOVED by clients!
I don't believe in offering surface-level or generic feedback. Instead, I provide comprehensive inline comments and chapter-level notes that capture my genuine emotional reactions, thoughts, and observations as I experience your story page by page.
Why choose me?
- In-depth analysis of your final draft.
- Targeted inline and chapter by chapter commentary.
- Suggestions for beginning, twists, endings, and hooks.
- Flagging errors in grammar and flow.
- Video consultation available before placing your order to ensure authenticity and discuss your project with confidence.
Emotional, character-driven stories captivate me the most!
Prices can be adjustable according to your affordability if we are collaborating for the first time!
Click on 'Order Now' or 'message' for further discussion!
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Language:
English
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Urdu
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What makes your beta reading service unique?
I provide in-depth, personalized feedback with a reader's perspective and a writer's insight. Whether it’s fantasy, young adult, or nonfiction, I focus on clarity, coherence, and engagement to help elevate your manuscript.
Do you specialize in specific genres for beta reading?
Yes! I specialize in fiction and memoirs, however I’m open to reading across genres , also have previous samples of non fiction books
What kind of feedback do you provide?
detailed, constructive and actionable feedback including what’s working well and where improvements can be made
How do I know if your beta reading style suits my project?
Before we start, I offer a sample beta read (on request) of a few pages to show you how I work. This helps ensure we’re a good fit and you know exactly what kind of feedback to expect.
Do you offer revisions or follow-up questions after the beta read?
Yes! I’m happy to clarify feedback or discuss ideas after you’ve reviewed my notes. I want to support you through your revision process.
Do you keep my manuscript confidential?
Yes, confidentiality is a top priority. Your manuscript will never be shared or discussed with anyone else without your permission.
What’s the difference between alpha and beta reading?
Alpha reading focuses on early-stage feedback—big-picture issues like plot holes, pacing, and structure. Beta reading happens later and reflects a reader’s reaction to the story. I combine both to give you comprehensive insights that improve your manuscript from start to finish.
Can I send a longer manuscript than the listed word counts?
If your manuscript exceeds the word limit, just message me. I’ll create a custom offer for you based on the length and level of feedback required.
Reviews
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A artghose
United States
Ongoing collaborationShe does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?L linc_powers
United States
Ongoing collaborationMariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript to make it a better book based on her feedback. She let me know the improvements, word count, dialogue and the story and character development had...
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?M 
mikaeladodson
United States
Ongoing collaborationAll good and appreciate Mariya's help in helping craft my novel. We are working through it in chunks, and seems to be working well. My first novel, so a learning experience to be sure. Here are some more words! LOL!
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?M mizzy5
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationExcellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?C c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her thorough responses to my questions were well done. Definitely looking forward to working with her again. Thank you!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
84 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
A artghose
United States
Ongoing collaborationShe does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?L linc_powers
United States
Ongoing collaborationMariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript to make it a better book based on her feedback. She let me know the improvements, word count, dialogue and the story and character development had...
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?M mikaeladodson
United States
Ongoing collaborationAll good and appreciate Mariya's help in helping craft my novel. We are working through it in chunks, and seems to be working well. My first novel, so a learning experience to be sure. Here are some more words! LOL!
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?M mizzy5
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationExcellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?C c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her thorough responses to my questions were well done. Definitely looking forward to working with her again. Thank you!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
