I will beta read your romance book and provide honest feedback
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Are you wondering whether you nailed the story trope or the romance? Then you've come to the right person.
I have been reading romance novels since my tween days when I joyfully stumbled upon the Male/Female genre and then later got into the Male/Male genre. So I know all the elements that make these romance novels enjoyable and marketable.
I'll provide constructive advice on your book to help you to polish it and offer your readers a great story.
Story elements I'll address:
- Character development - Analyze whether the characters are complex and appealing.
- Plot - Find any plot holes in the story (if there are any).
- Dialogue - Check if it sounds natural and is engaging.
- Romance - Let you know if it's heartwarming.
- Conflict - Inform you if it's strong enough and believable.
- Pacing - Tell you if the story moves at an appropriate pace.
- Writing style - Point out whether you did 'show' the scenes without using too much description.
Expect in-line comments on the manuscript and a summary detailing what you should work on in the reader's report.
Please, feel free to contact me before ordering this gig if you have any questions or want specific feedback.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you beta read books longer than 100,000 words?
Sure! Contact me with your book length, and I will create a suitable custom offer.
Are you okay with erotic romance?
Yes, I'm cool with explicit, spicy, or smut sex scenes in romance novels.
What stories are a no-no for you?
I’m sure many enjoy these books (to each their own), but BDSM/domination novels with MCs calling each other Daddy, Little Girl, or Boy from the beginning to the end aren’t for me. If it’s just one or two roleplaying sex scenes, then I’ll read it.
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M mawking

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThis is the second book I've worked on with her, and she's made both of them better. Her feedback always arrives when she says it will, and it's genuinely thorough, not just "I liked this bit," but real, actionable suggestions that got to the heart of what wasn't working. The debrief at the end is worth the price on its own. Highly recommended.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?G gk_sands

United States
excellent communication and delivered as promised!
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M mawking

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaboration“Working with Martha was such a positive experience. She was professional, thoughtful, and provided feedback in a way that felt clear and easy for me to understand. This made the revision process significantly less overwhelming. You can tell she genuinely cares about helping writers improve their work....
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford

Canada
Quick turnaround, high quality comments provided that helped me with my writing. Would recommend.
$50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018

United States
Ongoing collaborationThank you very much for all your work on this draft!
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
19 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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M mawking

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThis is the second book I've worked on with her, and she's made both of them better. Her feedback always arrives when she says it will, and it's genuinely thorough, not just "I liked this bit," but real, actionable suggestions that got to the heart of what wasn't working. The debrief at the end is worth the price on its own. Highly recommended.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?G gk_sands

United States
excellent communication and delivered as promised!
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M mawking

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaboration“Working with Martha was such a positive experience. She was professional, thoughtful, and provided feedback in a way that felt clear and easy for me to understand. This made the revision process significantly less overwhelming. You can tell she genuinely cares about helping writers improve their work....
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford

Canada
Quick turnaround, high quality comments provided that helped me with my writing. Would recommend.
$50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018

United States
Ongoing collaborationThank you very much for all your work on this draft!
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?

