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I was looking for someone to alpha-read the first part of a new story, and I’m so happy I found Mary Show. She read my opening chapters and gave me excellent ideas for how to improve. It was also very helpful to know what was working well. Now I can use these notes to revise and improve. Many thanks... See more

This was one of the most thoughtful and thorough beta reads I have ever received. What impressed me most was the balance between encouragement and constructive feedback. Rather than offering generic comments, the reviewer engaged deeply with each chapter, highlighting specific strengths, identifying... See more

Mary was responsive, professional, friendly and attentive from the outset of our correspondence. She highlighted some crucial points in her feedback and reinforced in her comments that my manuscript is hitting the right notes and engaging the reader in the ways I intended. Her turnaround time was excellent... See more

I had the pleasure of working with this beta reader on my latest novel, and I couldn't be happier with the experience. The feedback was thorough, thoughtful, and incredibly well organized. Rather than simply pointing out areas for improvement, they explained why something worked or didn't work and always... See more

Mary had thoughts about trimming some longer internal musings/reflections to not interrupt the actions. It's something that I need to do on all my chapters it was just repeated, in nearly the exact same phrasing, for each chapter reflection. I would have like slightly more targeted feedback with specific... See more