I will review rewrite your book short story or script with feedback

Have you written a play or screenplay and want an honest, thoughtful assessment of how well it works?

I offer professional script analysis and constructive dramatic feedback informed by 13 years of experience in higher education, along with my background in theatre directing, acting, and teaching.

I will examine your writing with an eye toward what makes a story compelling on the page and effective in performance. Depending on your project, my feedback can address:

- Character development: Are your characters believable, complex, and engaging?

- Dialogue and subtext: Do the conversations feel authentic? What's happening beneath the surface?

- Structure and pacing: Does the story build momentum and hold the audience's attention?

- Themes and dramatic impact: What is the story communicating, and does it achieve its intended effect?

- Strengths and opportunities: What's working well, and where could further development make a difference?

Whether you're developing a stage play, screenplay, or short story, you'll receive thoughtful, specific feedback designed to help you see your work more clearly and make informed decisions about your next draft.