I will do a developmental edit of your fantasy novel

United States

I speak English, French
Hello! I'm Mies, a seasoned writer and meticulous editor with over 6 years of experience. From crafting compelling narratives to polishing manuscripts, I bring a passion for words to every project. Wh...
About this Gig

Is your fantasy or romantasy manuscript ready for the next level?


As a fantasy author and developmental editor, I help you balance intricate world-building, complex magic, and deep character arcs without sacrificing your pacing. I provide supportive, highly analytical, and constructive feedback to make your story shine.


What I analyze in your manuscript:


  • Plot & Pacing: Fine-tuning opening hooks, smoothing transitions, and maximizing the emotional impact of twists and betrayals.
  • Character Dynamics: Sharpening motivations, building realistic relationship resistance, and ensuring every love interest or side character has a distinct purpose.
  • World-building: Weaving atmospheric details seamlessly into your protagonist's POV to eliminate info-dumps.
  • Romance Beats: Ensuring high-spice or tension scenes deliver maximum impact while giving the characters proper breathing room.


What you receive:

  1. Detailed Editorial Report: A comprehensive breakdown of your plot arcs, character archetypes, world-building, and title suggestions.
  2. Continued Support: I will continue to be available after I provide the report if you have any questions or concerns.

Language:

English

Genre:

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Romance

Fantasy

Audience :

General readers

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Other

Delivery style preference

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