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I will beta read and give constructive feedback on your novel for low price
About this Gig
I will read and give detailed feedback on your manuscript! I am a new seller back on fiverr so offering very cheap prices. Get it while it lasts!
I ONLY ACCEPT THE FOLLOWING GENRES! SCI-FI, FANTASY, YOUNG ADULT, HORROR, THRILLER, DRAMA, ROMANCE WITH A SUB DRAMA(SCI FI/ FANTASY) AND PICTURE BOOKS.
When i review your story, I am actively looking for the following:
Did i get hooked within the first couple of lines?
How do i feel about your protagonist and antagonist? Are they believable? Do i care for them?
How is the pacing of the chapters? Too fast or slow?
Does everything make sense? Plot Holes?
Is the worldbuilding descriptive?
Is the dialogue Fluent and realistic?
Does your story match your target audience?
Are there inconsistencies? (Blue eyes one chapter then Red eyes next chapter)
Is the plot entertaining?
And much more depending on your manuscript!
As a writer myself working on a sci-fi novel; I know how hard you are working on that precious story of yours. Let me give you the feedback to make it the best that it could possibly be from a readers perspective.
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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Mike provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book, “Pebbles and the Biggest Number”. He was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Mike!
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J jomobenun
United States
Mike provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book, “Pebbles and the Biggest Number”. He was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Mike!
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
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