I will beta read your light novel or manga script

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India

I speak Malayalam, English, Hindi

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Light Novel,Manga Beta Reader

Hi! I'm Justy, a reader of light novels, manga, and manhwa. I'm brand new to beta reading this is my first time offering it as a service, so I'm still learning the ropes. What I can offer is an honest...
About this Gig

Are you writing a light novel, web novel, or manga/manhwa script and want honest reader feedback before you publish?

I'm new to beta reading professionally, but not new to reading critically I've spent years devouring light novels, manga, and manhwa, and I know what keeps me hooked versus what makes me put a story down. I bring genuine reader reactions, not vague "it's good" comments.

What I focus on:

  • Pacing (isekai/action arcs, slice-of-life rhythm, slow-burn romance beats)
  • Character voice and consistency
  • World-building clarity are power systems, magic rules, or settings easy to follow?
  • Dialogue flow and natural English phrasing
  • Plot holes, confusing transitions, or info-dumps

What you'll get:

A written reader report with specific notes not just editing, but an honest account of my experience as your target reader: where I got hooked, where I got confused, where I lost interest.

What this is NOT:

Not a line edit or proofread. Not a rewrite. Feedback only your story stays yours.

Send your manuscript or script (chapters, PDF, Google Doc) and I'll get you thoughtful, genre-aware feedback to revise with confidence.

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Comic book

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Mystery

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Romance

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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Hindi

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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    Justy gave me exactly what I needed: their overall impressions of my short story. They also read my story thoroughly and sent their report super fast. I appreciate their attention to detail and the questions they asked about the story. Justy was also specific in their impressions of all the characters....

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5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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Most relevant
  • C
    image-docs

    ccflipz

    US

    United States

    5

    Justy gave me exactly what I needed: their overall impressions of my short story. They also read my story thoroughly and sent their report super fast. I appreciate their attention to detail and the questions they asked about the story. Justy was also specific in their impressions of all the characters....

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No