I will beta read your fiction manuscript, give honest feedback

4.4
4.4

Nigeria

I speak English

8 orders completed

Avid Beta Reader, and Book Editor

Most authors fear sending their manuscript out and finding out too late that something wasn't working, a flat middle, a rushed ending, a character readers never connected with. By then, it's already i...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Tired of getting "I loved it!" from friends and family and still not knowing if your book actually works?

That kind of feedback feels nice, but it doesn't tell you if your pacing drags, if readers connect with your characters, or if your ending really lands. And once your book is out, that's exactly the feedback that shows up in your reviews instead.

I'll read your manuscript the way your target reader will, then send you a clear, structured report covering:

  • Plot and pacing
  • Character connection and arcs
  • Reader engagement (where they'll get bored, confused, or hooked)
  • Overall ending impact

Genres I work with: Fantasy, Fiction, Romantasy, Thriller, Mystery, Romance, Contemporary Fiction

Why work with me:

  • Your manuscript stays 100% confidential (NDA available on request)
  • ️Feedback that's honest and specific, never harsh or discouraging
  • I read as a genre fan first, so my notes actually match what your readers expect

Let's get your manuscript ready to publish with confidence, not guesswork.

Message me before ordering if you want to talk through your project first!

Genre:

Adventure

Fanfiction

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

6 reviews for this Gig
4.4

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.3
  • Quality of delivery
    4.5
  • Value of delivery
    4.5
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    mayo554

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    The feedback I received was first class. Descriptive in each chapter breakdown of both plot, characters and readability with strengths and weaknesses highlighted. Very positive feedback and also grounded. Very happy to work with Boluwaji again in future projects. Highly recommended. Ryan

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    mayo554

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    The work was excellent and very informative about any discrepancies in the manuscript. I ha e enjoyed working with Boluwaji. During my draft manuscript process. Highly recommended.

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    No
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    jerrykendrabras

    ZA

    South Africa

    5

    Great experience with the seller.

    $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    alex804

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    4

    Very good very professional will work with him again.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • A

    alex804

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Excellent experience from start to finish. The feedback was not only thorough but also actionable—every suggestion had a clear purpose and helped elevate the story. They showed a strong understanding of structure, character development, and pacing. This wasn’t surface-level critique—it was thoughtful,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

6 reviews for this Gig
4.4

(4)
(1)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.3
  • Quality of delivery
    4.5
  • Value of delivery
    4.5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M
    image-docs

    mayo554

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    The feedback I received was first class. Descriptive in each chapter breakdown of both plot, characters and readability with strengths and weaknesses highlighted. Very positive feedback and also grounded. Very happy to work with Boluwaji again in future projects. Highly recommended. Ryan

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    mayo554

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    The work was excellent and very informative about any discrepancies in the manuscript. I ha e enjoyed working with Boluwaji. During my draft manuscript process. Highly recommended.

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jerrykendrabras

    ZA

    South Africa

    5

    Great experience with the seller.

    $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    alex804

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    4

    Very good very professional will work with him again.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    alex804

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Excellent experience from start to finish. The feedback was not only thorough but also actionable—every suggestion had a clear purpose and helped elevate the story. They showed a strong understanding of structure, character development, and pacing. This wasn’t surface-level critique—it was thoughtful,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No