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I will provide developmental editing for your novel
Nicole Neuman, Book Editor and Writer
Nicole Neuman has over 16 years of editing experience with traditional publishing houses and literary magazines. She has university degrees in English Literature (with a minor in French Literature) an...
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What people loved about this freelancer
gweniethkell496
United States
I worked with Nicole on my first book and returned to her for my second because I enjoyed her style, comments and the advice that she gave. She is professional...
sofiaulrikson
Norway
Nicole provided the kind of professional and direct feedback I was looking for from a seasoned editor, and assessed my manuscript from more angles than I had...
user27381702
United States
I enjoyed working with Nicole on this novel. She brought parts that need work to my attention, and helped me understand the parts that worked, and why they...
About this Gig
The gig is for short stories, novels (romance, sci-fi, horror, fantasy, literary and commercial fiction, thriller, crime fiction, mystery, Y.A., NA), memoirs, nonfiction books, for authors who wish to publish at a commercial standard without losing their individuality.
To engage readers, it's important that the manuscript follows certain narrative rules. As a developmental editor, I offer detailed feedback on:
-the structure of your book
-an in-depth view at character arcs
-continuity
-dialogue
-action
-description
-pacing
-tone & style
-clarity
-how to improve readability
-ways to 'hook' the reader.
Developmental editing is a deep analysis of all of these plus:
-themes and how they intertwine in your writing
-analysis of story structure, flow
-character motivations and character interiority
-world building (too much or too little)
-character psychology and the interactions between your characters
-how the characters interact with their world
-inconsistencies, plot holes
-tension, suspense and where they may be lacking.
You'll receive:
-a report with my detailed analysis,
-your manuscript with my comments throughout including suggestions on how to correct the problems.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Gnat Smoke Press
Books Publishing
Southern Gothic is a wonderfully dark collection of short stories that I edited.
Jul 2020-Sep 2020
Book Depository
Ecommerce
"Chain of Starlight" is a Sci-Fi masterpiece I was a beta reader for.
Mar 2022-Apr 2022
My Portfolio
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
Reviews
57 reviews for this Gig
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sarareel
Repeat Client
United States
Nicole's editorial reports were not only thorough and professional but also deeply intuitive—she understood the heart of my characters, and the overall narrative and messaging. Nicole’s feedback was always clear, respectful, and honest—striking that rare balance between critique and encouragement. If...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
jmtannehill
Repeat Client
United States
Exceptional editing skills and devotion to the material. I will be glad to work with her again!
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?J jmtannehill
Repeat Client
United States
It was an absolute honor to share my stories with her. She made great suggestions and helped elevate them above and beyond! I will definitely work with her again!
$400-$600
Price
13 days
Duration
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Helpful?L lolasal
Canada
This was my first time working with Nicole, and I look forward to working with her again on my next project.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?F 
fionaross802
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
I've worked with Nicole for several projects and I trust her absolutely with my work. I can rely on her to fill the gaps I haven't thought of and to make constructive suggestions. Her overview is comprehensive and at the same time, she misses nothing in the detail. All delivered on time, supportive service with a smile.
$600-$800
Price
3 weeks
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?
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S sarareel
Repeat Client
United States
Nicole's editorial reports were not only thorough and professional but also deeply intuitive—she understood the heart of my characters, and the overall narrative and messaging. Nicole’s feedback was always clear, respectful, and honest—striking that rare balance between critique and encouragement. If...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?J jmtannehill
Repeat Client
United States
Exceptional editing skills and devotion to the material. I will be glad to work with her again!
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?J jmtannehill
Repeat Client
United States
It was an absolute honor to share my stories with her. She made great suggestions and helped elevate them above and beyond! I will definitely work with her again!
$400-$600
Price
13 days
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?L lolasal
Canada
This was my first time working with Nicole, and I look forward to working with her again on my next project.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?F fionaross802
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
I've worked with Nicole for several projects and I trust her absolutely with my work. I can rely on her to fill the gaps I haven't thought of and to make constructive suggestions. Her overview is comprehensive and at the same time, she misses nothing in the detail. All delivered on time, supportive service with a smile.
$600-$800
Price
3 weeks
Duration
N Seller's Response
Helpful?
