Patrick J Nilan

Thank you Patrick. I will try and incorporate as many of your suggestions as I can and then maybe have you read it again. I guess I thought it was quite clear, and maybe clearer in my current draft. that Hell is awaiting them all for breaking the rules. Their choices here are also being watched, but... See more

Patrick provided me what I was looking for: an honest reaction and thorough breakdown of the major elements of my first five chapters. I liked his work so much, I'm hiring him to read the remaining chapters of my book. Very pleased.

This was my second time working with Patrick on a fiction manuscript, which was beta reading a story modified from his earlier comments. He is an excellent beta reader who is very good both at pointing out broad strokes that need adjustment or that work well, as well as finding out those small details... See more

Thank you for your feedback! The comments in the document helped me see what the reader is thinking and your feedback was thorough and actionable. I look forward to updating my manuscript with the feedback you left

Patrick is one of the best beta readers I have worked with, which is why this was neither my first time placing an order with him nor will it be my last. His inline comments are extremely useful for gauging how the text lands with a reader and where adjustments are needed to ensure clarity. For anyone looking for honest feedback, Patrick is the real deal.