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I will beta read your epic fantasy novel
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Richard O has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
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About this Gig
I will beta read your epic fantasy story and provide constructive critique and suggestions that will ensure that your worldbuilding, magic system, lore, pacing, and character arc bring out the best in your story.
You will get:
- Inline comments that will let you know what goes on in the mind of your typical reader
- Chapter by chapter critique
- A comprehensive book report
The book report will analyse:
- Characters
- Conflict
- Theme
- Setting
- World building
- Magic system
- Plot
- Epic fantasy tropes
- Point of view
- Style, tone and voice
- Climax
- Resolution
Unique value I bring:
- Fearless critique
- I do not use AI in my beta reading process
- Knowledge of writing craft
- A sociology degree will help me evaluate the social dynamics of your characters, ensuring they're authentic
- Military experience will help me ensure your action and combat are realistic
Ready to elevate your manuscript to publishing standards? Place your order now or send me a message!
Genre:
Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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Richard provided exactly the kind of developmental feedback I was hoping for. His report was thorough, well-organized, and balanced. He didn't just point out areas that needed improvement—he also took the time to explain what was already working, which gave me confidence in my story's strengths while...
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Richard provided exactly the kind of developmental feedback I was hoping for. His report was thorough, well-organized, and balanced. He didn't just point out areas that needed improvement—he also took the time to explain what was already working, which gave me confidence in my story's strengths while...
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11 days
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