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I will critique your novel, literary agent query package, novel editor and proofreader
Transforming your unique vision into a stunning Wix reality
Your website is your digital storefront. It tells your story. If your site feels outdated or fails to convert, I am here to change that. I do not just build pages; I create engaging digital experience...
About this Gig
You finished your novelcongratulations! But now comes the scariest step: submitting your literary agent query package.
Are you worried your query letter will get lost in the slush pile? Struggling to condense your plot into a synopsis? Unsure if your opening chapters have a gripping hook?
You don't have to do this alone. I'm Usmane. I am an agented, traditionally published author of two novels with HarperCollins, a professional editor, and a member of the EFA. I know exactly what agents look for because I've been there.
What You Get:
- Cover Letter Critique: A deep-dive review and edit to make your pitch flawless.
- Synopsis Edit: Streamlining your summary to clearly communicate your story's arc.
- First 3 Chapters Evaluation: A meticulous edit of your opening pages to hook agents.
- Insider Tips: Industry standards to help your submission package stand out.
- Full Developmental Edit: Comprehensive manuscript pacing and plot review (optional).
Spaces fill up FAST! Please message me before ordering so we can discuss your project and genre. Lets get your book published!
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FAQ
Will you give me overall feedback on my submission?
Absolutely! In addition to providing full critique and edits on each requested element, I will also give you feedback on the cohesion and clarity of your whole MS, should you opt for the full MS edit.
What if I need a critique on more than the first 3 chapters?
No worries! Send me a message, and I'll create a custom order for you that fits your needs.
What format will I receive my edits and agent query critique in?
I will send a tracked changes word document for each element you've requested as well as a clean document with changes made for the first 3 chapters (or 12k words).
