I will beta read your self help book and give honest manuscript feedback

Nigeria

I speak Yoruba, French, English

Book Editor and Beta Reader Honest, Actionable Manuscript Feedback

Hello, I'm Olushola Temiloluwa, a professional book editor and beta reader helping authors turn manuscripts into clear, engaging, reader-focused books. I provide honest, thoughtful, and actionable fee...
About this Gig

Is your self-help book actually helping your reader?


"I liked it" won't help you publish or sell your book. I read your manuscript as your target reader and tell you exactly where your message lands, where it drags, and where readers may lose interest.


WHAT YOU'LL RECEIVE:

  • A written feedback report (PDF or Word)
  • Chapter by chapter notes on clarity, flow, and usefulness
  • Advice that feels vague, repetitive, or hard to apply
  • Questions a reader would ask that your book doesn't answer yet
  • Your top strengths and top 3 fixes


BEST FOR: mindset, habits, productivity, leadership, wellness, relationships, and personal growth manuscripts.


HOW IT WORKS:

  • Message me or place your order
  • Send your manuscript and tell me who it's for
  • Get your report within 3 days


Your manuscript stays confidential and is never shared or reused.


Not sure which package fits? Message me before ordering and I'll point you to the right one.


Genre:

Business management

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Health fitness

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Memoir/ biography

Language:

English

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French

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