I will write professional feedback for your screenplay

Professional feedback brings you big steps closer to being a professional yourself. The stress and anxiety of wondering if you or your script are good enough, or if your rewrite brought it to the next level, can all be taken away with detailed, encouraging, and honest feedback that reveals what can be improved and what already works.

Isn't it relieving to know no matter what you write, you'll get guaranteed detailed notes to help you become a better writer? Won't it make writing your next draft more fun?

I have written script feedback for the New York International Screenplay Awards for 3 years, and now I can do it for you. I focus on these script elements:

1. Premise: How it stands out from other stories

2. Theme: message and impact

3. Formatting: A balanced ratio between action, dialogue and visuals.

4. How to be lean, sharp and engaging

I challenge writers to use their imagination and offer cinematic experiences both evocative and provocative in their own way. I help you see your strengths, improve your weaknesses and to be as original as possible, but also to balance it out with simplicity for the sake of its production feasibility and commercial appeal.