I will beta read or alpha read fiction novel, stories, scripts, critique manuscripts

You've rewritten chapter one eleven times. You can't tell anymore if it works. That's what happens when you live inside a manuscript for months. You need a reader who comes to it cold.

I'm Pixie Theodore. I beta read and alpha read fiction: short stories, novellas, novels, and scripts. You get the honest experience of a real reader, delivered kindly and in detail.

What you get:

• In-line comments with my reactions as I read: laughs, confusion, chills, boredom, "more of this please"
• Chapter-by-chapter feedback or one overall read, your choice
• A reader report on hook, plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, and worldbuilding
• Plot holes and loose ends flagged before an agent finds them
• Answers to your questions
• Light grammar notes if you want them, or story-only feedback. your call.

Favorites: romance, fantasy, romantasy, horror. I'll read any genre with a pulse.

My feedback is honest but never harsh. Every weakness comes with why it failed and what to try instead. Every strength gets named, so you know what to protect.

This is a read, not a full edit. Over my word limits? Message me for a custom quote.

Send me your story. I'll tell you what a reader really thinks.