Pearl P

Thank you, Pearl, for another wonderful set of feedback! As we work together, your gentle, but astute advice has definitely helped me see what's missing, and how I might shape what needs to be revealed, when. I love, that despite my weak worldbuilding, you still understand exactly what I am trying to... See more

Thank you again Pearl! I think there was a bit more to construct on this one so thank you so much for going to so much effort on it! It was a lot of work! And you've really helped me realise what's needed to ease the transition from 1 to 2 :) (and given me some more ideas besides...) I really, really... See more

I love working with Pearl. her feedback always feels super personal, but super grounded, which really suits the writing I am trying to accomplish. She's extremely kind with her praise and wise with her comments, which makes me want to keep going, keep adding layers, get to the next section just so I... See more

Thanks so much Pearl for yet another exceptional set of feedback! As you know, we are in rougher ground than with book 1, so your patience, careful constructions and attention to detail are extremely helpful. I love that, despite that it's a a rougher draft, you still manage to get the core of what I... See more

Thanks so much Pearl! I really enjoy reading your comments (they make me laugh now and then) and it's reassuring to have someone beta read who gets it. This is not meant to just be dense and fantasty-y, but human too (and humans are funny). I also really appreciate the constructive notes because they... See more