As an avid fiction reader, I believe the greatest disservice to a manuscript is polite feedback that ignores plot holes and flat tension. I specialize in Mystery, Psychological Thrillers, and Contemporary Romance.
My goal isn't to rewrite your story—it's to give you an unfiltered reader's perspective: where the opening stalls, where dialogue sounds forced, which character decisions break immersion, and where your story truly hooks the audience. You get thorough, practical feedback to tighten your book before real readers critique it on review pages. Let's make your story unforgettable.... Read more