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I will write cold linkedin dm scripts for fractional execs, consultants, coaches
Rayhan Bhatti
About this gig
Most cold DMs get ignored. They pitch in the first line, or open with "thanks for connecting," and get deleted before anyone reads past it.
I write scripts under 50 words. No pitch in message one. One observation about the person, one question that makes sense to answer. That's it.
Every order comes with two versions per prospect type: PAS and BAB. Test both, keep what gets replies.
I use these every day in my own outreach to fractional execs, consultants, and coaches.
Not templates pulled from a course. What's actually working right now.
Premium adds Instagram scripts too, for anyone running outreach on both platforms.
Send me who you are targeting and what you want the message to do. You get scripts ready to copy and send.
Get to know Rayhan Bhatti
Rayhan Bhatti
LinkedIn Profile, Content and Outreach for Founders and Coaches
- FromPakistan
- Member sinceNov 2016
- Avg. response time1 hour
- Last delivery11 months
Languages
English, Urdu
Hi, I'm Rayhan. 10+ years in B2B sales, closing deals since I was 13. I build LinkedIn systems for founders, coaches, and fractional executives whose profiles aren't working for them.
Most people on LinkedIn are invisible, or get attention that never turns into clients. I fix both. Profile rebuilds that make people stop scrolling, content that gets you seen by the right buyers, and outreach scripts that start real conversations.
Built for agencies, coaches, and my own business, shaped around your voice and your buyer, not a template.
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FAQ
Do you write for platforms other than LinkedIn?
LinkedIn is the core focus across every package. Premium also includes Instagram DM scripts, since a lot of fractional execs, consultants, and coaches run outreach on both.
Will these sound like AI wrote them?
No. Every script avoids the common AI tells, no dashes, no corporate buzzwords, no forced enthusiasm. These read like a person wrote them.
What's the difference between PAS and BAB versions?
PAS leads with the problem and agitates it before the solution. BAB paints the before and after with a bridge in between. You get both so you can test which one gets more replies from your specific audience.
Can you write these for my specific industry or niche?
Yes. Tell me who you're targeting and what matters to them, and the observation and question in each script get built around that, not generic outreach language.
Do you write the connection request too, or just the DM after they accept?
Just the DM. Connection notes get skipped or ignored most of the time. The real work happens once someone's already connected and reading your message.
Will these work if I'm targeting a different audience than fractional execs, consultants, or coaches?
The frameworks and rules (under 50 words, no pitch, one observation, one question) work for any B2B audience. Just tell me who you're targeting and what they care about.
How many scripts do I actually get?
Depends on the package. Basic covers 1 prospect type with 2 scripts (PAS and BAB) on LinkedIn. Standard covers 3 prospect types with 6 scripts on LinkedIn. Premium covers 5 prospect types with 10 scripts plus a follow-up sequence, split across LinkedIn and Instagram.
