Browse categories
Explore
Fiverr Pro
English
$
USD
I will beta read your fiction
Gig Summary
Editor, Beta and Sensitivity Reader, Game Narrative Designer, and Ghostwriter
Storytelling has been my passion for over 20 years. I bring that love of the game, a sense of humor, and professionalism to every project, whether writing, editing, or reading!
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Full-length manuscript response and evaluation. I am a genre-agnostic and will provide feedback on all types of fiction.
Feedback provided on:
- Character development and motivation.
- Worldbuilding and setting.
- Overall plot structure.
- Consistency in style and voice.
- Redundancies and plot holes.
- Emotional impact and pacing.
If you have specific questions and areas of interest, I am flexible in the focus of my read. I provide feedback with compassion & humor.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
Reviews
21 reviews for this Gig
| (20) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
D 
duncunt
United Kingdom
The report and comments were very useful. Some parts actioned immediately, others require more careful thought on my part. When a reader can make you see new things in a story you've read enough times to quote verbatim, you know they're ++good. 5* would recommend.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?T tristan9052
Australia
Rachel was a joy to work with. They show a deep understanding for the craft and love for the art.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?C charlottekazha
United States
Fast delivery and in depth responses.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?M merri_syn
United States
Great insights and tidbits for me to work with to make my opening hook even better.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?A albrouet
United States
Rachel was great! Very quick to respond, great notes, and everything was on time:)
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
21 reviews for this Gig
| (20) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
D duncunt
United Kingdom
The report and comments were very useful. Some parts actioned immediately, others require more careful thought on my part. When a reader can make you see new things in a story you've read enough times to quote verbatim, you know they're ++good. 5* would recommend.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?T tristan9052
Australia
Rachel was a joy to work with. They show a deep understanding for the craft and love for the art.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?C charlottekazha
United States
Fast delivery and in depth responses.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?M merri_syn
United States
Great insights and tidbits for me to work with to make my opening hook even better.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?A albrouet
United States
Rachel was great! Very quick to respond, great notes, and everything was on time:)
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
