I will beta read, critique, and provide feedback on your work

Brazil

I speak Portuguese, English

Beta Reader, Proofreader, Creative, Editor, and Translator

Hi! I'm Richard, a beta reader specializing in developmental feedback, worldbuilding, and character ideation. With a background in political science and 15+ years running RPG campaigns, I'll help refi...
About this Gig

Whether you've just finished your first draft or your fiftieth, I'd be glad to read it!


I deliver honest, actionable, and human-centered feedback to sharpen your story and make it stand out. From quick gut-checks to deep editorial dives, I help you unlock your narrative's full potential. Here is what my review covers:


  • Detailed reader feedback and first impressions
  • Highlight plot inconsistencies and pacing issues
  • Review character development and emotional depth
  • Check dialogue authenticity and readability
  • Offer suggestions for clarity and flow
  • Identify confusing or slow sections
  • Give genre-specific insights 
  • Worldbuilding, systems, lore, and consistency


Why me?

  • Passionate reader with 15+ years of hands-on worldbuilding experience
  • Honest, structured, and reader experience focused feedback
  • Unique lens from political science and creative background
  • Detail-oriented and committed to strengthening your story


Have a project you're working on? Send me a quick message with the details, and I'll help you navigate the best options, no strings attached!


*All documents should be in Microsoft Word or Google Doc format.

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Education

Mystery

Science fiction

Fantasy

Language:

English

Portuguese

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