I will professionally edit your personal statement or statement of purpose

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

Canada

I speak English

11,200 orders completed

Gig Summary

Pro Editor and Publisher Helping Authors Create Exceptional Books

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Vetted for

  • Ad Copy

  • Articles & Blog Posts

  • Book Editing

  • Brand Voice & Tone

  • Email Copy

  • Product Descriptions

  • Proofreading & Editing

  • Resume Writing

  • Sales Copy

  • Website Content

  • Writing Advice

  • eLearning Content Development

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What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

Vetted Pro

Personal statement editing that gets results - yes, really! My clients have received offers from Harvard, CMU, Cornell, Columbia, NYU, NEU, Penn, UW, Yale, and countless other top schools. Have a dream school in mind? I'd love to help you get there!

 

As the author of Write Your Graduate Admissions Workbook, The Medical School Personal Statement Workbook, and The Medical Residency Personal Statement Workbook, I've spent 10+ years helping students transform rough drafts into persuasive, engaging essays that give you a competitive edge and stand out from the competition while retaining your voice and making your unique qualifications shine.

 

I work with graduate, Ph.D., law, college, medical school, and residency applicants in all fields.

 

Deep editing includes:

·      Structural edits and strategic improvements for logic & persuasiveness

·      Improving clarity, tone, conciseness, consistency, & readability

·      Proofreading for spelling, grammar, and punctuation

·      Actionable comments and suggestions

·      Rewriting for flow & fluency

·      Removing obvious AI-istic language patterns

·      Alignment with requirements

Language:

English

Content type:

Personal statement

Genre:

Education

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Clients I’ve worked with
Coursera

Coursera

Education Organization

Copyedited internal course content intended for Coursera instructors.

Nov 2020-Jan 2021

Ethereum

Ethereum

Crypto & Blockchain

Copyedited blog posts, newsletters, and internal correspondence related to the organization's decentralized blockchain platform and flagship cryptocurrency.

Jan 2015-Mar 2016

My Portfolio

Reviews

583 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(564)
(15)
(4)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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  • K

    kalysta416

    US

    United States

    5

    I absolutely loved the work Robin put into my personal statement! Before working with her, I was feeling overwhelmed and honestly all over the place with my essay. I had so many ideas and experiences that I wanted to include, but I was struggling to organize them and give my statement a clear direction....

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thefinestart

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Robin on my SOP was a great experience. Across three rounds of revisions, each version became noticeably clearer, more engaging, and easier to follow. She helped me connect my experiences and goals into a coherent story while keeping my voice and personal motivations intact. I really appreciated...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thefinestart

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Robin was thoughtful, thorough, and quick to respond throughout the process. When I asked for a little more help with my SOP after several rounds of revisions, she kindly took the time to do one final read-through. Her attention to detail helped improve the clarity and flow while preserving my voice....

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    asifmahdin

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Got my SOP proofread by Robin. I really liked how simple changes can really make my story pop. Great work!

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    stefanies1988

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing delivery! Great attention to detail, definitely a highly skilled editor and someone I will work with again. Highly recommend her to improve your manuscript and ensure consistency

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

583 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(564)
(15)
(4)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • K

    kalysta416

    US

    United States

    5

    I absolutely loved the work Robin put into my personal statement! Before working with her, I was feeling overwhelmed and honestly all over the place with my essay. I had so many ideas and experiences that I wanted to include, but I was struggling to organize them and give my statement a clear direction....

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thefinestart

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Robin on my SOP was a great experience. Across three rounds of revisions, each version became noticeably clearer, more engaging, and easier to follow. She helped me connect my experiences and goals into a coherent story while keeping my voice and personal motivations intact. I really appreciated...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thefinestart

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Robin was thoughtful, thorough, and quick to respond throughout the process. When I asked for a little more help with my SOP after several rounds of revisions, she kindly took the time to do one final read-through. Her attention to detail helped improve the clarity and flow while preserving my voice....

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    asifmahdin

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Got my SOP proofread by Robin. I really liked how simple changes can really make my story pop. Great work!

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    stefanies1988

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing delivery! Great attention to detail, definitely a highly skilled editor and someone I will work with again. Highly recommend her to improve your manuscript and ensure consistency

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No