I will professionally edit your personal statement or statement of purpose
Gig Summary
Pro Editor and Publisher Helping Authors Create Exceptional Books
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Robin Schroffel was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.
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Ad Copy
Articles & Blog Posts
Book Editing
Brand Voice & Tone
Email Copy
Product Descriptions
Proofreading & Editing
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What people loved about this freelancer
kalysta416

United States
I absolutely loved the work Robin put into my personal statement! Before working with her, I was feeling overwhelmed and honestly all over the place with my...
thefinestart

United States
Working with Robin on my SOP was a great experience. Across three rounds of revisions, each version became noticeably clearer, more engaging, and easier to...
thefinestart

United States
Robin was thoughtful, thorough, and quick to respond throughout the process. When I asked for a little more help with my SOP after several rounds of revisions,...
asifmahdin

United States
Got my SOP proofread by Robin. I really liked how simple changes can really make my story pop. Great work!
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Personal statement editing that gets results - yes, really! My clients have received offers from Harvard, CMU, Cornell, Columbia, NYU, NEU, Penn, UW, Yale, and countless other top schools. Have a dream school in mind? I'd love to help you get there!
As the author of Write Your Graduate Admissions Workbook, The Medical School Personal Statement Workbook, and The Medical Residency Personal Statement Workbook, I've spent 10+ years helping students transform rough drafts into persuasive, engaging essays that give you a competitive edge and stand out from the competition while retaining your voice and making your unique qualifications shine.
I work with graduate, Ph.D., law, college, medical school, and residency applicants in all fields.
Deep editing includes:
· Structural edits and strategic improvements for logic & persuasiveness
· Improving clarity, tone, conciseness, consistency, & readability
· Proofreading for spelling, grammar, and punctuation
· Actionable comments and suggestions
· Rewriting for flow & fluency
· Removing obvious AI-istic language patterns
· Alignment with requirements
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
Genre:
Education
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Coursera
Education Organization
Copyedited internal course content intended for Coursera instructors.
Nov 2020-Jan 2021
Ethereum
Crypto & Blockchain
Copyedited blog posts, newsletters, and internal correspondence related to the organization's decentralized blockchain platform and flagship cryptocurrency.
Jan 2015-Mar 2016
My Portfolio
FAQ
How do I know I'm ready for editing?
First, complete the essay's first draft to the best of your ability. Then send it to friends, family, and professors for some feedback. Complete another draft based on their suggestions. Can't take it any further on your own? You're now ready to work one-on-one with an editor to finalize your work.
How do I order?
Orders are based on word count – the total number of words in your file. Simply enter the total number of words in your file into the field, and it will automatically calculate the total so you can order. If you're confused, send me a message!
English isn't my native language. Can you help me?
Yes! I love helping international students. I specialize in perfecting non-native English by rewriting and rephrasing non-native English so that the focus stays on your qualifications, not your language skills.
I have multiple essays. What do I do?
If you have multiple short essays, you can bundle them into 1 order by adding together the total word count or send me a message for a custom offer.
What are your revision policies?
Deep editing includes 1 additional revision for changes based on my feedback. Submit your revision within 3 days of receiving the edited essay, or the order is considered closed. The entire order, including revisions, must be completed within 7 days.
Can you write my personal statement from scratch?
No, sorry! Academic integrity matters. But I'm happy to help with heavy editing of your completed draft.
I wrote my essay with AI. Can you help?
I help with rewriting obvious AI phrasing and making suggestions that make your essay specific to you. But I don’t rewrite to pass AI detectors or achieve a certain score. You’re on your own with that.
583 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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K kalysta416

United States
I absolutely loved the work Robin put into my personal statement! Before working with her, I was feeling overwhelmed and honestly all over the place with my essay. I had so many ideas and experiences that I wanted to include, but I was struggling to organize them and give my statement a clear direction....
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?T thefinestart

United States
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Robin on my SOP was a great experience. Across three rounds of revisions, each version became noticeably clearer, more engaging, and easier to follow. She helped me connect my experiences and goals into a coherent story while keeping my voice and personal motivations intact. I really appreciated...
$800-$1,000
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?T thefinestart

United States
Ongoing collaborationRobin was thoughtful, thorough, and quick to respond throughout the process. When I asked for a little more help with my SOP after several rounds of revisions, she kindly took the time to do one final read-through. Her attention to detail helped improve the clarity and flow while preserving my voice....
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?A asifmahdin

United States
Ongoing collaborationGot my SOP proofread by Robin. I really liked how simple changes can really make my story pop. Great work!
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?S stefanies1988

United Kingdom
Amazing delivery! Great attention to detail, definitely a highly skilled editor and someone I will work with again. Highly recommend her to improve your manuscript and ensure consistency
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
583 reviews for this Gig
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| (15) | ||
| (4) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
K kalysta416

United States
I absolutely loved the work Robin put into my personal statement! Before working with her, I was feeling overwhelmed and honestly all over the place with my essay. I had so many ideas and experiences that I wanted to include, but I was struggling to organize them and give my statement a clear direction....
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
R 
Seller's Response
Helpful?T thefinestart

United States
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Robin on my SOP was a great experience. Across three rounds of revisions, each version became noticeably clearer, more engaging, and easier to follow. She helped me connect my experiences and goals into a coherent story while keeping my voice and personal motivations intact. I really appreciated...
$800-$1,000
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?T thefinestart

United States
Ongoing collaborationRobin was thoughtful, thorough, and quick to respond throughout the process. When I asked for a little more help with my SOP after several rounds of revisions, she kindly took the time to do one final read-through. Her attention to detail helped improve the clarity and flow while preserving my voice....
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?A asifmahdin

United States
Ongoing collaborationGot my SOP proofread by Robin. I really liked how simple changes can really make my story pop. Great work!
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?S stefanies1988

United Kingdom
Amazing delivery! Great attention to detail, definitely a highly skilled editor and someone I will work with again. Highly recommend her to improve your manuscript and ensure consistency
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

