I will refine your pitch deck with investor insights


About this gig
Your pitch deck isn't landing, and you don't know why.
Whether you're pitching investors, a competition panel, a grant committee, or an accelerator, the people deciding read fast and look for a reason to say no. Most founders are too close to their own story to see where a reader gets lost. I read your deck the way they do, then tell you exactly what to fix.
Every review includes:
- A scorecard across the 10 areas funders look for: problem, solution, how it works, market size, competition, go to market, traction, projections, team, and vision
- Written feedback on every slide: what's working, what's confusing, and what's missing
Deep Dive Review adds rewrite guidance for your 3 weakest slides and an honest verdict on whether your deck is ready to send.
Review & Live Session adds a 45 minute call to walk through everything together.
I've evaluated 300+ startup pitches professionally and coached more than a hundred founders preparing to pitch for funding. Earlier in my career, I worked on a venture capital investments team.
A revision means I check your updated deck against my original notes, not a full new review.
Get to know Alonso C
Growth strategist for early stage startups ands small businesses
- FromUnited States
- Member sinceSep 2026
Languages
English, Spanish
FAQ
What stage of startup is this for?
Pre-seed to Series A and small businesses. Anyone preparing to raise capital, pitch, or have a clearer narrative through a pitch deck.
Do you write the deck for me?
This service is review and feedback, not writing from scratch. If you need a full deck written, message me first and we can discuss it.
What languages do you work in?
English and Spanish. I can review your deck in either language.
How is this different from hiring a designer to review my deck?
Designers judge how your deck looks. I judge whether it convinces an investor: the story, the numbers, the logic. Most decks fail on narrative, not visuals.
My deck isn't finished yet. Should I wait?
No, send what you have. I'll review your complete slides and flag exactly what's missing, so you know what to build next instead of guessing.
What counts as a revision?
A revision means I review your updated deck against my original notes and tell you whether the changes worked. It isn't a full new review. If you've rebuilt the deck from scratch, a new order is the better fit.
Is my deck kept confidential?
Yes. I only use your deck to complete your review, and I never share it or your business details with anyone.
Can you introduce me to investors?
No. This service is focused on making your deck as strong as possible before you send it. I don't make introductions to investors, judges, or grant committees.
How will I know the review worked?
Your scorecard sets a baseline across all 10 areas. After you update your deck, use your revision and I'll confirm which areas improved. I can't guarantee funding or a win, since those depend on more than the deck, but you'll know exactly where it stands before you send it.

