I will provide industry standard script coverage
Script Analyst and Consultant
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Congratulations! You've finally got that script finished. Getting the first draft over the line can feel like a Herculean effort, whether it's a tidy five-minute short film or a 200-page epic feature. Now it's time to polish that gem of a screenplay...
What my feedback and consultations provide:
- .Comprehensive, actionable feedback: Targeted advice that will significantly enhance your script.
- Submission readiness: Prepare your script for submission to competitions, literary agents, or studios to ensure it stands out.
- Compelling logline: Crafting an attention-grabbing logline is crucial for marketing your screenplay effectively.
- Technical and readability enhancements: Even if your writing style is top-notch, readability is key to captivating readers.
- Scriptwriting coaching and full script development.
When you set out to write a script, it's often difficult to see the wood from the trees, so a fresh set of eyes can make all the difference. I offer practical, objective and in-depth feedback and insight to help you turn your next draft into your best draft.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Why buy your coverage?
As an experienced script consultant, my feedback will always be impartial, supportive and honest and is designed to encourage and engender collaboration. My goal is that after you have received my feedback, you are itching to tackle the next rewrite, fresh with newfound enthusiasm in your script.
How can your feedback help?
A fresh set of eyes can help you see your script in a new light. I can highlight the areas in your script that most need improving. No script is perfect, so whether I am reading your first draft or your fifty-first, I can help get your script even more polished and ready to be read.
What other services do you offer?
In addition to coverage, I offer; -Video Consultations -Annotated Page Notes -In-depth Character Analysis -Comprehensive Plot Analysis -Long-term and intensive development cycles Send me a message to ask how these services can help your script.
Why order a video consultation?
A video conference consultation is an excellent opportunity for a writer to workshop ideas, refine potential improvements before implementation, and address any questions or concerns you may have about your script. Book a consultation and take your feedback process to the next level!
What's in your written notes?
Standard script coverage includes: -Logline -Comments, broken down into readable sections -Analyses of narrative structure, plot and character -Discussion of tone and style Other elements can be included or omitted as appropriate to the client and script.
What type of scripts will you read?
All kinds! Anything from a tiny short to a full blown feature, to treatments and even stage plays, I will happily read your script and provide you a concise and impartial set of notes.
Can I submit my script multiple times?
Of course! I love the idea of an ongoing relationship with a writer and would relish the opportunity to follow up on a script. However, I suggest you only resubmit following a significant redraft, and I will only accept it as a new coverage request.
Is there a page limit?
Yes. I operate a page limit of 135 pages, but if your historical epic is running a little longer, you can order an add-on.
63 reviews for this Gig
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M mammolese2002

United Kingdom
Very professional and detailed feedback. Ryan offered strong insights into structure and character, especially regarding the protagonist. Helpful notes that will support further development of the script.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?G gsfields2004

Italy
Very useful notes
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?J jdfilmstv

United States
Great working with Ryan!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mikeurban1

United States
Ryan took a deep dive into my main character's flaws instead of doing the standard overview of the script. Highlighting, and fixing, the flaws will make the rest of the script more impactful.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J 
jamarlofton

United States
I love getting his feedback, I'm able to keep my writing up, and will use him again.
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
63 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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M mammolese2002

United Kingdom
Very professional and detailed feedback. Ryan offered strong insights into structure and character, especially regarding the protagonist. Helpful notes that will support further development of the script.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?G gsfields2004

Italy
Very useful notes
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?J jdfilmstv

United States
Great working with Ryan!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mikeurban1

United States
Ryan took a deep dive into my main character's flaws instead of doing the standard overview of the script. Highlighting, and fixing, the flaws will make the rest of the script more impactful.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J 
jamarlofton

United States
I love getting his feedback, I'm able to keep my writing up, and will use him again.
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?

