I will developmental edit format romance fantasy sci fi thriller
Fantasy Developmental Editor
About this Gig
A good story can have a good idea and still feel slow, confusing, or unfinished. That's where developmental editing can help.
I'm Ryan Blake, a developmental editor working with writers of romance, fantasy, sci-fi, and thriller fiction. I look at the story as a whole and help you identify what is working, what is holding the manuscript back, and where it can become stronger.
I can help with:
- Plot and story structure
- Pacing and slow sections
- Character development and arcs
- Romance and relationship development
- Conflict, tension, and stakes
- Fantasy and sci-fi worldbuilding
- Thriller suspense, reveals, and plot logic
- Chapter flow and consistency
- Endings that need more impact
You'll receive practical feedback on your manuscript, including what needs attention and why. I won't rewrite your book or make it sound like mine. Your voice and story stay yours.
Whether you have a rough first draft, a manuscript that feels stuck, or a nearly finished novel that needs perspective, I'll help you see the bigger story more clearly.
Send me your manuscript or a sample, and let's look at what's working and what could be stronger.
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Language:
English
Genre:
Adventure
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Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
Children
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does developmental editing include?
I look at the bigger picture of your story, including plot, structure, pacing, character arcs, conflict, tension, word building, chapter flow, story logic, and the ending.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. Developmental editing is about helping you understand what is working and what needs improvement. Your writing style and voice remain yours.
Can you work with a first draft?
Absolutely. A first draft can be a great time to identify structural and story issues before you move into final revisions.
What will I receive?
You'll receive detailed, practical feedback on your manuscript, highlighting strengths, problem areas, and specific areas where the story could be developed further.
Can you edit a full-length novel?
Yes. Please send me your approximate word count before ordering so I can review the project and make sure the package is suitable.

