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I will proofread your fight scenes
Product Manager and Admissions Interviewer
I’m a Dartmouth alum and admissions interviewer, now a Product Manager at a top tech company, offering mock interviews and detailed feedback on essays. I also provide realistic fight scene feedback fo...
About this Gig
Bring your fight scenes to life with professional feedback from someone who knows action firsthand. I hold a second-degree black belt in Taekwondo with experience in several other martial arts such as Karate, Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu, Aikido, Arnis, and Wing Chun. I provide detailed, actionable feedback to make your action sequences realistic, clear, and exciting.
Whether youre writing novels, scripts, or game scenes, Ill review choreography, pacing, character movement, and combat plausibility. All packages start with 1,000 words, with optional extras for additional words or revisions. I help writers ensure their fight scenes flow naturally, feel authentic, and keep readers on the edge of their seats.
Language:
English
Content Type:
Film/TV scripts
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Book
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Short story
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What types of fight scenes do you review?
I review all types of action sequences, including martial arts, hand-to-hand combat, sword fights, and more. Feedback focuses on realism and believability.
Do you correct grammar or spelling?
My focus is on realism or action accuracy. I may not major readability issues, but grammar and spelling are not my primary focus.
Do you rewrite scenes?
No. I provide feedback, suggestions, and note to improve scenes, but the work remains yours.
Can you tailor feedback to a specific martial arts style?
Yes! Please share the style or type of combat so I can give the most tailored, accurate feedback.
