I will beta read and provide feedback on your story or novel

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

279 orders completed

Picasso said: Inspiration exists, but it has to find you working!

Professional developmental reader with a BA in English & Creative Writing. As a US Marine veteran, I bring a high level of discipline and a sharp, analytical eye to every narrative. I've spent years c...

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About this Gig

NOW BOOKING SLOTS FOR *AUG/SEP 2026.* Contact me before ordering.


PREMIUM BETA READING for your short, mid-range, or novel-length fiction, including in-line comments, style editing, and proofreading that moves you faster toward traditional or self-publishing.


Hundreds of honest and polite in-line comments offer brief reader reactions, lengthier observations, and actionable suggestions within your manuscript.


Hundreds of in-line edits focus on spelling, grammar, and style. I read each word carefully and conscientiously.


The multi-page Beta Reader Report provides thoughtful, thorough notes on "What Works," "What to Work On," and responses to your initial comments and questions. I'll consider:


  • Pace
  • Plot & story
  • Point of view
  • Character arcs
  • Potential points of confusion
  • Narrative structure
  • World-building
  • Dialogue
  • ...and more


I have a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English. I'm happy to read any genre for all ages and audiences, including but not limited to science fiction, fantasy, romance, crime, thriller, mystery, adventure, literary, upmarket, Christian, YA, and more. I want your fiction to shine. Let's get started!

Genre:

Adventure

Humor/ entertainment

Literary fiction

Mystery

Language:

English

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Reviews

222 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
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    k_fosterauthor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a novel is tough, and getting the right beta reader is the difference between a project and a successful project. I'm consistently impressed with Chris' work product. He really goes above and beyond to give you feedback that is not only polite, but honest. His comments within the manuscript are...

    $400-$600

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
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    daniel_w_storm

    HR

    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
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    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Wonderful attention to detail and a great sense of what it takes to write fiction. Another reviewer might be able to find the flaws, but it takes a very special reviewer like Chris to help the author find a path forward and discover workable solutions. Chris is adept at the full range of editorial critiquing and development.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

222 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(219)
(0)
(3)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • K

    k_fosterauthor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a novel is tough, and getting the right beta reader is the difference between a project and a successful project. I'm consistently impressed with Chris' work product. He really goes above and beyond to give you feedback that is not only polite, but honest. His comments within the manuscript are...

    $400-$600

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    daniel_w_storm

    HR

    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Wonderful attention to detail and a great sense of what it takes to write fiction. Another reviewer might be able to find the flaws, but it takes a very special reviewer like Chris to help the author find a path forward and discover workable solutions. Chris is adept at the full range of editorial critiquing and development.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No