I will do a one pass developmental edit and manuscript critique

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

286 orders completed

Gig Summary

Picasso said: Inspiration exists, but it has to find you working!

Professional developmental editor with a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English. As a US Marine veteran, I bring elite discipline and a sharp analytical eye to every manuscript. Having critiqued hu...

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Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

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Known for exceptionally quick replies

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About this Gig

NOW BOOKING: JAN. 2027. (Limited for short/beta projects in late Q4). Contact me before ordering.


Get comprehensive, high-end developmental editing for your short or novel-length fiction to move you faster toward traditional or self-publishing. As an expert editor with a BA in Creative Writing & English, I offer three tailored passes to ensure your manuscript shines:


  • BASIC: The Macro Beta Pass. Macro story experience, reader reactions averaging 1-2 comments per chapter, and a 3-page structural report evaluating your pacing, plot, and character arcs.


  • STANDARD: One-Pass Developmental Diagnostic. Deep-dive critique. Thousands of words of inline comments tracking worldbuilding logic, dialogue, POV shifts, pacing, and plot holes. A report of 5+ pages.


  • PREMIUM: Premium Dev. Edit & Style Polishing. The full package. Everything in Standard plus meticulous inline style editing, prose polishing, syntax tuning, market positioning, and sharp line rewrites.


I edit all age ranges and provide a professional critique for fantasy, science fiction, romance, thriller, mystery, adventure, historical, literary, upmarket, or YA manuscripts.


I want your fiction to shine. Let's get started!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

228 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    steveheimberger

    US

    United States

    5

    If you're looking for a beta reader who will roll up his sleeves and become a real partner in your book, Chris is your guy. He put in nearly 26 hours of work, provided a 7-page Reader Report, and left over 100 in-line Word comments totaling more than 15k words. It will take me weeks to deconstruct all...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    9 weeks

    Duration

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    glenncoachlivin

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I've published 8 books with over 2 million readers now, and have had more than two dozen editors, reviewers, and beta readers. Chris is, by far, the very best! He really does go above and beyond to dig into the material and provide useful feedback. He has strengthened my journey in immeasurable ways and I'm sure he'll strengthen yours too :-)

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

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    lotushoots

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris has been incredibly helpful in guiding me toward a better understanding of how to improve my story. He has been an excellent beta reader, and his reader report was thoughtful, well-organized, and easy to follow. His feedback will help me get into the right mindset to approach my revisions with...

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ambiguousguy21

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Excellent analysis of my story.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ambiguousguy21

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Very professional analysis of the story.

    $50-$100

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

228 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(225)
(0)
(3)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S
    image-docs

    steveheimberger

    US

    United States

    5

    If you're looking for a beta reader who will roll up his sleeves and become a real partner in your book, Chris is your guy. He put in nearly 26 hours of work, provided a 7-page Reader Report, and left over 100 in-line Word comments totaling more than 15k words. It will take me weeks to deconstruct all...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    9 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    glenncoachlivin

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I've published 8 books with over 2 million readers now, and have had more than two dozen editors, reviewers, and beta readers. Chris is, by far, the very best! He really does go above and beyond to dig into the material and provide useful feedback. He has strengthened my journey in immeasurable ways and I'm sure he'll strengthen yours too :-)

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lotushoots

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris has been incredibly helpful in guiding me toward a better understanding of how to improve my story. He has been an excellent beta reader, and his reader report was thoughtful, well-organized, and easy to follow. His feedback will help me get into the right mindset to approach my revisions with...

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ambiguousguy21

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Excellent analysis of my story.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ambiguousguy21

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Very professional analysis of the story.

    $50-$100

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No