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I will be your professional developmental editor, all genres
Developmental editor for aspiring writers, Bilingual in Eng Spa
About this Gig
Please message me before placing order
Ready to take your manuscript to the next level, but feeling stuck?
You've poured your heart into your novel, now it's time for a fresh perspective. I offer developmental editing that provides actionable, honest feedback to help you refine your story, while keeping your voice intact.
What you'll get:
- A detailed editorial letter covering big-picture elements
- Inline comments with suggestions and insights
- Actionable advice to improve your manuscript
I typically focus on:
- Plot arcs and structure
- Character development
- Plot holes and inconsistencies
- Pacing and flow
- Timeline consistency
- Worldbuilding and setting
- Voice and tone
I specialize in Romance, Young Adult, Mystery, and Suspense/Thriller, but I don't offer rewriting services or proofreading/grammar correction (that comes later).
Why work with me?
With years of experience in developmental editing, I specialize in helping emerging writers refine their stories through a professional and empowering approach.
In the attachments of the gig, you'll find a document outlining the feedback you'll receive.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing improves the structure, pacing, and narrative of your manuscript. I offer feedback on character development, plot, worldbuilding, and tone, helping strengthen your manuscript before moving to copyediting or proofreading.
Do you provide custom orders?
Yes, I offer custom orders! If you have specific requirements or need a service tailored to your manuscript, feel free to message me with the details. I’ll work with you to create a package that fits your needs.
Do you read sensitive/triggering content?
I read all types of content, except for explicit scenes of SA or detailed depictions of suicide. If these themes are implied but not graphically described, I can still work with them. With my background in psychology, I can also provide insights and support in developing your characters.
Do I need to have a completed manuscript to get feedback?
Yes, for thorough feedback, a completed manuscript is ideal. If you’re still drafting, I can give feedback on that portion as well. Please message me and we will figure something out.
What is the best way to submit my manuscript?
Submit your manuscript in Word, PDF, or Google Docs. If using Google Docs, share it with me in editing mode.
Can you work with documents in languages other than English?
Yes, I can work with manuscripts in Spanish, my native language.
I need ideas and strategies for adding more content to my academic work, can you help me?
In this case I would first message me so I can study if I know enough about the topic and have enough resources to help you. At first I don't have any problems but I'd want to make sure before you order so we are on the same page.
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United States
She told me things that other beta readers weren't able to out their fingers on as far as room for improvement. Very helpful.
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journalistshelb
Repeat Client

United States
awesome feedback, thank you so much!
Helpful?D djenneg3

United States
Esther was an amazing person to work with. when she finished my book, she gave me a clear, honest and constructive way for me rewrite my book. I was feeling a bit stuck and needed some support with my writing. I needed to know where I needed to make changes and she helped. I received feedback that included...
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Helpful?J 
journalistshelb
Repeat Client

United States
Esther is super easy to work with! She was able to customize a plan to help me in my particular writing process and gave great feedback without being discouraging. This was even back to me earlier than expected. I will continue to work with her in the future!
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zarinaelahi

United States
Esther delivered great feedback in a timely manner despite getting stranded in a snowstorm! I would highly recommend her.
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Helpful?
14 reviews for this Gig
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| (2) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Recommend to a friend
- Service as described
Sort By
A akwarren1979

United States
She told me things that other beta readers weren't able to out their fingers on as far as room for improvement. Very helpful.
Helpful?J 
journalistshelb
Repeat Client

United States
awesome feedback, thank you so much!
Helpful?D djenneg3

United States
Esther was an amazing person to work with. when she finished my book, she gave me a clear, honest and constructive way for me rewrite my book. I was feeling a bit stuck and needed some support with my writing. I needed to know where I needed to make changes and she helped. I received feedback that included...
E Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
journalistshelb
Repeat Client

United States
Esther is super easy to work with! She was able to customize a plan to help me in my particular writing process and gave great feedback without being discouraging. This was even back to me earlier than expected. I will continue to work with her in the future!
Helpful?Z 
zarinaelahi

United States
Esther delivered great feedback in a timely manner despite getting stranded in a snowstorm! I would highly recommend her.
E Seller's Response
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