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I will be your professional developmental editor, all genres

4.9
4.9

Spain

I speak English, Spanish

34 orders completed

Developmental editor for aspiring writers, Bilingual in Eng Spa

I'm a fiction editor and writer with a deep love for storytelling and a sharp eye for structure, pacing, and emotional impact. I work closely with authors to help them shape compelling, polished manus...
About this Gig

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Ready to take your manuscript to the next level, but feeling stuck?

You've poured your heart into your novel, now it's time for a fresh perspective. I offer developmental editing that provides actionable, honest feedback to help you refine your story, while keeping your voice intact.


What you'll get:

  • A detailed editorial letter covering big-picture elements
  • Inline comments with suggestions and insights
  • Actionable advice to improve your manuscript


I typically focus on:

  • Plot arcs and structure
  • Character development
  • Plot holes and inconsistencies
  • Pacing and flow
  • Timeline consistency
  • Worldbuilding and setting
  • Voice and tone


I specialize in Romance, Young Adult, Mystery, and Suspense/Thriller, but I don't offer rewriting services or proofreading/grammar correction (that comes later).


Why work with me?

With years of experience in developmental editing, I specialize in helping emerging writers refine their stories through a professional and empowering approach.


In the attachments of the gig, you'll find a document outlining the feedback you'll receive.

Genre:

Romance

Language:

English

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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

14 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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    akwarren1979

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    United States

    5

    She told me things that other beta readers weren't able to out their fingers on as far as room for improvement. Very helpful.

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    journalistshelb

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    awesome feedback, thank you so much!

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    djenneg3

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther was an amazing person to work with. when she finished my book, she gave me a clear, honest and constructive way for me rewrite my book. I was feeling a bit stuck and needed some support with my writing. I needed to know where I needed to make changes and she helped. I received feedback that included...

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  • J
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    journalistshelb

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther is super easy to work with! She was able to customize a plan to help me in my particular writing process and gave great feedback without being discouraging. This was even back to me earlier than expected. I will continue to work with her in the future!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    zarinaelahi

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther delivered great feedback in a timely manner despite getting stranded in a snowstorm! I would highly recommend her.

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

14 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(12)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Recommend to a friend
    4.9
  • Service as described
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    akwarren1979

    US

    United States

    5

    She told me things that other beta readers weren't able to out their fingers on as far as room for improvement. Very helpful.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    journalistshelb

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    awesome feedback, thank you so much!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    djenneg3

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther was an amazing person to work with. when she finished my book, she gave me a clear, honest and constructive way for me rewrite my book. I was feeling a bit stuck and needed some support with my writing. I needed to know where I needed to make changes and she helped. I received feedback that included...

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    journalistshelb

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther is super easy to work with! She was able to customize a plan to help me in my particular writing process and gave great feedback without being discouraging. This was even back to me earlier than expected. I will continue to work with her in the future!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • Z
    image-docs

    zarinaelahi

    US

    United States

    5

    Esther delivered great feedback in a timely manner despite getting stranded in a snowstorm! I would highly recommend her.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No