Sarah

@sarah1021

Novel, Romance and Thriller Developmental Edit

Brazil
English, Portuguese
About me
Hi, I'm Sarah, Developmental Editor and writer specializing in Novel, Romance and Psychological Thrillers. I help authors fix plot holes, strengthen characters and improve pacing before publishing. You get a 2-3 page report, inline comments on your manuscript, and genre notes on tension, spice level and character chemistry. 10 days delivery for careful reading and quality feedback. English and Portuguese manuscripts welcome. I give honest but kind feedback focused on making your story stronger. Message me with questions.... Read more

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Developmental Editing
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Self_Employed

Development Editor

Self Employed • Freelance

Nov 2025 - Present • 7 mos

Professional Background I’m a developmental editor specializing in fiction for both new and published authors. My work focuses on the big picture: plot structure, character arcs, pacing, tension, and overall story impact. Grammar fixes are easy — my job is to make sure your story works emotionally and keeps readers turning pages. What I Deliver: Manuscript Assessment: Big-picture feedback on plot, character, pacing + editorial letter; Line & Structural Edits: In-line comments + tracked changes showing exactly where and why; Revision Guidance: Clear next steps so you know what to fix after our work together. My Approach: I edit like a reader first, editor second. You’ll get tough feedback where it matters, but always respectful and actionable. No jargon, no ego — just clear guidance to make your book the best version of itself. As a voracious reader since the age of 8, I know exactly what makes a reader unable to stop reading.