I will critique your story with focus on plot and character

My aim is that your story is the best that you can make it.

I'll be looking for plot holes, character inconsistencies, worldbuilding issues, and continuity errors that you might have overlooked. It can be difficult to spot these in your own story as you edit.

The advice will be given with the best intention, and with my reasonings, but you do not have to agree with it all. Sometimes disagreeing with an opinion helps to clarify what it is you are looking for.

The assessments will fall into 4 categories:

Plot

Character

Language: dialogue and description balance. "Crutch words" and overused concepts.

General comments: will be as individual as you are. Might include pacing issues, alternatives to consider, fact checking, or inconsistencies.

With years of experience of giving and receiving feedback and critiques, including at undergraduate and MA Creative Writing levels, I will give the feedback with sensitivity and always focused on you as the writer. The only goal is your satisfaction with your own writing.

Please note that I do not use AI in any of my work