I will give detailed feedback on the first 3 pages of your script

First impressions matter!

Imagine this: You've written a film that could win Best Picture at the Oscars... but nobody seems to be reading it.

What if it had amazing dialogue, heart-stopping action and a killer ending, yet nobody gets that far because the first 3 pages weren't very engaging? Or worse, confusing...

Next!

The truth of the industry is this: Agents and Producers are busy, and their assistants, who read your script first, are overworked and underpaid. So if your first 3 pages don't inspire them to read more, they wont.

With this service I'll give the sort of honest, in-depth feedback you need to help make those first 3 pages pop, ensuring that tired assistant keeps reading and passes it to their boss.

Why me?

I'm a produced Screenwriter for Sky Cinema, Winner of BBC Writers Room and Screenwriters Network and Grand Finalist of ScreenCraft. I've also been through the BBC Radio Commissioning Process, script edited Commercials and pitched to Producers.

I'm also an actor, represented by one of the top UK agents, appearing in a number of global commercials and films including 'The Theory of Everything' opposite Eddie Redmayne.