I will give development notes on your screenplay

give development notes on your screenplay

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Description up to 4 screenplay pages up to 20 screenplay pages up to 100 screenplay pages
  I will provide detailed story notes on structure, flow, style, and format on your 4-page screenplay. I will provide detailed story notes (structure, flow, style, and format) on your 20-page screenplay. I will provide detailed story notes (structure, flow, style, and format) on 100-page screenplay.
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About This Gig

LIMITED TIME BONUS!!!! If you order my premium pilot/feature notes service ($45+) I will give you my basic screenwriting leads gig for free after you give an honest review of my gig. That is 10-20 screenwriting job leads from industry professionals, taking you one step closer to selling your screenplay!


Is your script ready? Before you submit to a contest, producer or an agent, you need to make sure your script represents your best talent. I will provide professional notes on your screenplay. This includes overall summary on story flow and structure, any problems I identify and suggestions to fix these. I will also provide sticky notes on your actual screenplay that includes fixing formatting errors as well as stylistic comments on scene headings, action lines and dialogue. I will also fix any grammatical errors I will catch. My service is the same you would pay $125+ if you go through a script coverage/notes provider, except these services do not give sticky notes (usually a service that costs way over $250+).

Frequently Asked Questions

  • What is included?
    My basic package includes notes for 4 script pages (written using industry standard formatting). I will give overall story notes and fix any issues on formatting + give stylistic notes on scene headings, action lines, and dialogue on every page. In addition, I fix any grammatical errors I catch.
  • I have more than 4 pages, what package should I order?
    My basic package is $5 for 4 pages. You can order extras if you have more pages: $15 extra ($20 total) for 20 pages and $35 extra (total $40) for full feature-length or pilot script of 60 to 120 pages.
  • How long have you provided notes?
    I have over 5 years of experience in providing story notes on novels and screenplays. I love story structure and the challenge of taking an idea from scratch and helping evolve it to a professionally written story with all the right elements and surprises. I have worked with producers and writers.