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I will give professional screenplay feedback
Screenwriter, Producer, and Filmmaker
Screenwriter & Filmmaker (MFA in Screenwriting) based in Hollywood. Mentored by writers of Kim Possible, X-Men, and Batwoman, I’ve been optioned and produced with my TV series and audio projects. With...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Award-winning screenwriter and filmmaker with 7 years of experience in Los Angeles, I've worked with the producers of Free Guy and Criminal Minds and mentored by the writers of Batwoman, Kim Possible, and X-Men. I did my MFA in Screenwriting at New York Film Academy. I'm the show creator & director of an audio drama Bonnie Screws Up (10K+ listeners), web-series Here We Are (250K+ views), and multiple festival-winning films. I run writers rooms, direct ensemble casts, and consult on scripts for producers and directors. Let's sharpen your story and get it industry-ready.
What you get:
I'll dissect your script the way execs do: structure, pacing, theme, tone, characters, dialogue, world, market fit, relevance.
Message first to confirm fit & page count.
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Other Scriptwriting Services I Offer
FAQ
Why is there no sample/example work?
Because most of my writing is protected under NDAs or still in development with producers and collaborators. This industry runs on discretion until projects are optioned, sold, or released. I take that confidentiality seriously and bring that same professionalism to your work.
Reviews
19 reviews for this Gig
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C cheriedoyen729
United States
The breakdown of my screenplay along with details on how to better align it with industry standards was detailed and actionable. She responded very quickly and delivered the work a day early. I am grateful for her insight.
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B birdceeb
United Kingdom
Great work, delivered VERY fast but still really in depth notes, far more than I would have expected and greats critiques and tips. 5 stars, would recommend!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S serdararslanagi
Repeat Client
Turkey
Great work! Thanks!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?R robinscia
Cambodia
I thought it was a templated cut and paste solution. I'm not sure the script was even properly read.
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Seller's Response
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edbergman
United States
Amazingly clear communication and follow-through. Really knows her craft. Will definitely seek out her guidance as soon as she is available.
Helpful?
Reviews
19 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
C cheriedoyen729
United States
The breakdown of my screenplay along with details on how to better align it with industry standards was detailed and actionable. She responded very quickly and delivered the work a day early. I am grateful for her insight.
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B birdceeb
United Kingdom
Great work, delivered VERY fast but still really in depth notes, far more than I would have expected and greats critiques and tips. 5 stars, would recommend!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S serdararslanagi
Repeat Client
Turkey
Great work! Thanks!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?R robinscia
Cambodia
I thought it was a templated cut and paste solution. I'm not sure the script was even properly read.
S Seller's Response
Helpful?E edbergman
United States
Amazingly clear communication and follow-through. Really knows her craft. Will definitely seek out her guidance as soon as she is available.
Helpful?
