
Seraphina
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Alpha And Beta Reader, Book Editor, Manuscript Critic
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Beta Reader & Book Editor
The Los Angeles Press • Full-time
May 2020 - Present • 6 yrs 2 mos
I provide beta reader–level manuscript feedback with professional developmental editing expertise. As a professional beta reader, I analyze character development, voice authenticity, dialogue effectiveness, and emotional depth. I offer actionable, easy-to-implement suggestions to help you improve your story and bring out its full potential.
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veev22

United States
This is my first attempt at writing a book. I’ve had friends read it, but I wanted a person that doesn’t know me to provide real feedback. They followed the brief, and confirmed what I already was feeling the book needed. Now I can’t prove it, but I feel as though my book was put through AI, chapter...
jennpierce917

United States
I'm already looking forward to my next round of feedback. She really understood every twist. Every plot point. She picked up where it wasn't fleshed out or too long. But I think most importantly, as someone trying to finish a novel (as I have a history of starting them) it convinced me that I'm making...
teresamarie_23
Repeat Client

United States
Her review was so much more than I expected. I feel like I have a partner, someone who really cares about the story. I am so appreciative of her observations and her suggestions. A true professional in every way. Thank you!
cinteot

United States
I received a nearly line by line analysis of my document which is more than I was asking for. The analysis was full of detail and offered alternatives where I'd missed the mark. This was fantastic work.
juliaharbert
Repeat Client

United States
Seraphina did an amazing job. She read through all the chapters I gave her and gave me clear and precise feedback. Her suggestions were practical and actionable. When I go back through each chapter, I will have a clear roadmap to guide my steps to make my story even better. I especially appreciate how...
