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Seraphina
@serah_phina
Level 2
Alpha And Beta Reader, Book Editor, Manuscript Critic
United States
English
About me
I’m Seraphina, a professional alpha and beta reader with a degree in literature from UCLA and 6 years of experience at The Los Angeles Press as a Beta Reader & Book Editor. I provide a full range of services, including Beta & Alpha Reading, Editing & Self Publishing.
My goal is to give you the beta reader–level manuscript feedback you need, combined with professional developmental editing expertise. I analyze character development, voice authenticity, dialogue effectiveness, and emotional depth, providing suggestions to help you improve your story and make it truly resonate with readers.
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$15/hour
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Beta Reading
I will beta read critique novel, romance beta reader, beta reader fantasy, alpha reader
Beta Reading
I will beta read, critique romance beta reader, horror thriller, beta reader fantasy
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Beta Reader & Book Editor
The Los Angeles Press • Full-time
May 2020 - Present • 6 yrs 4 mos
I provide beta reader–level manuscript feedback with professional developmental editing expertise. As a professional beta reader, I analyze character development, voice authenticity, dialogue effectiveness, and emotional depth. I offer actionable, easy-to-implement suggestions to help you improve your story and bring out its full potential.
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veev22
United States
This is my first attempt at writing a book. I’ve had friends read it, but I wanted a person that doesn’t know me to provide real feedback. They followed the brief, and confirmed what I already was feeling the book needed. Now I can’t prove it, but I feel as though my book was put through AI, chapter...
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kat_aurora_
United States
I was hoping for someone to point out where in my manuscript I lost readers, or got into the worldbuilding weeds, but this was the most thorough and actionable feedback I've ever received on my writing! Seraphina did an analysis of every chapter including what worked well, and where I could tighten it...
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silvahni_cadenc
United States
I loved working with this beta reader, she was able to see my massive plot and all it's sub-plots and gave me excellent criticism. I highly recommend her, she is professional and very detailed. Since I write epic fantasy, my plot was a huge deal and she immediately understood my genre and gave me feedback accordingly.
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wqbelle
Canada
This was an excellent review, delving into the details of the manuscript and offering suggestions for improving the writing. I found the analysis insightful, objective, and helpful. Sometimes, I can have the tendency of missing the forest for the trees. I appreciated the reviewer's immediate and unfiltered...
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jennpierce917
United States
I'm already looking forward to my next round of feedback. She really understood every twist. Every plot point. She picked up where it wasn't fleshed out or too long. But I think most importantly, as someone trying to finish a novel (as I have a history of starting them) it convinced me that I'm making...
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