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I will beta read, critique romance beta reader, horror thriller, beta reader fantasy
Gig Summary
Alpha And Beta Reader, Book Editor, Manuscript Critic
I’m Seraphina, a professional alpha and beta reader with a degree in literature from UCLA and 6 years of experience at The Los Angeles Press as a Beta Reader & Book Editor. I provide a full range of s...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
silvahni_cadenc
United States
I loved working with this beta reader, she was able to see my massive plot and all it's sub-plots and gave me excellent criticism. I highly recommend her, she...
streichlynn
United States
I am very thankful to have found Seraphina. She was fast and very thorough. She spent much time understanding the manuscript and provided genuine feedback that...
brhippo
United Kingdom
It is great to get feedback that the underlying story works as expected and where a user can feel less engaging.
brhippo
United Kingdom
The details and feed back were excellent. Some of the suggestions for changes completely made sense and when you're so close to the writing sometimes you don't see the bad sentences.
templjam
Bulgaria
Serah provided an excellent proofreading service. She was very attentive to detail, professional, and delivered the work exactly as promised. I am very satisfied...
About this Gig
Are you an author who spends time writing a story, only to realize your story structure feels off, your pacing drags in places, or your characters aren't resonating? Or perhaps you're looking for someone who truly understands your story idea or genre.
That's where I come in
I'm Seraphina I provide beta reader level manuscript feedback with professional developmental editing expertise. As a professional beta reader, I analyze character development, voice authenticity, dialogue effectiveness, and emotional depth. I offer actionable, easy-to-implement suggestions to help you improve your story and bring out its full potential.
WHAT I OFFER
- Feedback on pacing, character development, dialogue, and plot
- Notes on emotional impact and reader engagement (did I cry? did I laugh? )
- Honest reactions from a reader's perspective
- You'll receive a full beta Reading document
- Actionable suggestion to improve your story
Genre I Love To Read
- Fantasy Beta Reading
- Dystopian Beta Reading
- Leitura Beta Reading
- Horror-thriller Beta Reading
- Sci-fi Beta Reading
- Cozy mystery Beta Reading
- Romance, Romantasy, Dark Romance Beta Reading
Your story deserves to connect with readers Contact Me Now
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Can I request a specific type of feedback?
Absolutely! If you’re looking for feedback on a specific aspect, such as character development, pacing, or plot structure, feel free to let me know upfront. I tailor my feedback to meet your needs and focus on the areas that matter most to you.
Do you offer feedback on grammar and spelling?
While my focus is on the overall structure, character development, and emotional impact of your story, I can offer general observations on grammar or spelling errors if they’re noticeable. For line-by-line editing (like grammar, spelling, and sentence-level improvements)
Do you offer feedback on short stories or novellas?
Yes! I’m happy to work with shorter manuscripts too. For short stories and novellas, the feedback process is typically faster, but you’ll still receive the same in-depth analysis.
How long will it take to receive feedback on my manuscript?
The timeline depends on the length and complexity of your manuscript. Typically, I provide feedback within 2–3 weeks for novels (50,000–90,000 words), but I will always give you an estimated completion date when you submit your work.
Do you offer editing services after the beta reading?
Yes! After receiving beta reading feedback, many authors choose to take the next step and have their manuscript edited. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and copyediting services to help refine your manuscript further. These services can be tailored based on your needs.
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S silvahni_cadenc
United States
I loved working with this beta reader, she was able to see my massive plot and all it's sub-plots and gave me excellent criticism. I highly recommend her, she is professional and very detailed. Since I write epic fantasy, my plot was a huge deal and she immediately understood my genre and gave me feedback accordingly.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?S streichlynn
United States
I am very thankful to have found Seraphina. She was fast and very thorough. She spent much time understanding the manuscript and provided genuine feedback that will help make my manuscript better. I hope to work with her again in the near future!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?B brhippo
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
It is great to get feedback that the underlying story works as expected and where a user can feel less engaging.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B brhippo
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
The details and feed back were excellent. Some of the suggestions for changes completely made sense and when you're so close to the writing sometimes you don't see the bad sentences.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T templjam
Bulgaria
Serah provided an excellent proofreading service. She was very attentive to detail, professional, and delivered the work exactly as promised. I am very satisfied with the final result and would definitely recommend her services to others.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
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S silvahni_cadenc
United States
I loved working with this beta reader, she was able to see my massive plot and all it's sub-plots and gave me excellent criticism. I highly recommend her, she is professional and very detailed. Since I write epic fantasy, my plot was a huge deal and she immediately understood my genre and gave me feedback accordingly.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?S streichlynn
United States
I am very thankful to have found Seraphina. She was fast and very thorough. She spent much time understanding the manuscript and provided genuine feedback that will help make my manuscript better. I hope to work with her again in the near future!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?B brhippo
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
It is great to get feedback that the underlying story works as expected and where a user can feel less engaging.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B brhippo
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
The details and feed back were excellent. Some of the suggestions for changes completely made sense and when you're so close to the writing sometimes you don't see the bad sentences.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T templjam
Bulgaria
Serah provided an excellent proofreading service. She was very attentive to detail, professional, and delivered the work exactly as promised. I am very satisfied with the final result and would definitely recommend her services to others.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
