I will beta read and give feedback and critique

4.9
4.9

Netherlands

I speak English, Dutch, Italian, French

965 orders completed

Gig Summary

I'm a published novelist and professional editor with a master's in Film Studies and credits at the Venice Film Festival, Warner Bros, and Village Roadshow. With over 900 completed projects, I've help...

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About this Gig

I'll evaluate your manuscript with compassion and honesty, delivering an eye-opening evaluation. I'm a published author, journalist, and reviewer.

I know the feeling of showing others your work. I get the frustration of getting stuck. I've been a novice. I got my foot in the door. I have published two literary novels and self-published crime fiction. I worked as a film/travel journalist and have reviewed crime fiction. I have a master's in film and have worked in the film industry; I recognize a good story when I see one.

I want to build your manuscript up and develop its strong points. You can count on me to clear the path for your creativity and success. 

I look at plot, characterization, tone, tension, dialogue, structure, chapter-length ( beginning and ending points), continuity, rhythm, and target audience. I will find inconsistencies. 

They picked my first manuscript out of the slushpile; I will give you tips on how to grab the editor's or readers' attention with your opening chapters. If you like, I can help you with your submission letter.

I love my fellow authors and am a voracious reader; it'll be my pleasure to work together. 

Genre:

Children’s books

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Fantasy

Language:

Dutch

English

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553 reviews for this Gig
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    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    geekyarcher

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I've had three beta readers on Fiverr for my manuscript. Simona was by far the best. Her notes were incredibly helpful. Frankly, I was in tears reading the report. She understood every single moment I intended a reader to feel, and her inline comments showed a level of care and engagement I didn't expect....

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    greencache

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona delivered! I was so nervous about having my first "book baby" beta read, but Simona delivered exceptional feedback. She understood all the elements I wanted to convey, and for the reader to understand while reading my novel. She offered an incredible report, touching on everything I needed, while...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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  • G

    geekyarcher

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona did a beta read of my urban fantasy novel (book 2 in a series), and it was everything you want from a beta and rarely get. She didn't just react; she traced the book. She caught and cataloged plant-and-payoff threads I'd buried chapters apart, the kind of thing a writer can't see from inside their...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    paytonleegold

    US

    United States

    5

    As a first time writer I was very nervous about this process. But working with Simona was great! Her feedback was incredibly precise, showing exactly what needed work, and even better, what was already working well. I feel as an Author it is easy to overthink our work, and Simona really helped me see that this was a story worth writing about.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    mlabute14

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona has done it again! She beta read my 200k word manuscript and effortlessly, eloquently surfaced detailed themes that pervade the book, with key insights about what worked and what could be trimmed down. I also really appreciate the comps and suggestions about how to query agents since I'm a neophyte...

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

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Reviews

553 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(543)
(10)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • G

    geekyarcher

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I've had three beta readers on Fiverr for my manuscript. Simona was by far the best. Her notes were incredibly helpful. Frankly, I was in tears reading the report. She understood every single moment I intended a reader to feel, and her inline comments showed a level of care and engagement I didn't expect....

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    greencache

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona delivered! I was so nervous about having my first "book baby" beta read, but Simona delivered exceptional feedback. She understood all the elements I wanted to convey, and for the reader to understand while reading my novel. She offered an incredible report, touching on everything I needed, while...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    geekyarcher

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona did a beta read of my urban fantasy novel (book 2 in a series), and it was everything you want from a beta and rarely get. She didn't just react; she traced the book. She caught and cataloged plant-and-payoff threads I'd buried chapters apart, the kind of thing a writer can't see from inside their...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    paytonleegold

    US

    United States

    5

    As a first time writer I was very nervous about this process. But working with Simona was great! Her feedback was incredibly precise, showing exactly what needed work, and even better, what was already working well. I feel as an Author it is easy to overthink our work, and Simona really helped me see that this was a story worth writing about.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    mlabute14

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Simona has done it again! She beta read my 200k word manuscript and effortlessly, eloquently surfaced detailed themes that pervade the book, with key insights about what worked and what could be trimmed down. I also really appreciate the comps and suggestions about how to query agents since I'm a neophyte...

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No