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xenabern

France
Like last time, Simona dazzled me with her professionalism and her eloquence, in addition to her quick responsiveness and punctuality of delivery. Her intelligence...
willie_rose

United States
Simona’s understanding of what I was trying to say without me telling her upfront is nothing less than exceptional. And I’m purposefully not saying much about...
tapuziel

United States
Working with Simona was an absolute delight. She was proactive in asking what I needed from the review, and was very flexible in dealing with my requests, even...
xenabern

France
I couldn’t believe how lucky I was to have found Simona —her in-depth knowledge on the subject I was writing astonished me, and made me blush. But instead of...
mikaylab143

United States
Simona went above and beyond with my project. I want to sincerely thank her for her dedication to her craft and her attention to detail in my story. I didn't...
About this Gig
I'll evaluate your manuscript with compassion and honesty, delivering an eye-opening evaluation. I'm a published author, journalist, and reviewer.
I know the feeling of showing others your work. I get the frustration of getting stuck. I've been a novice. I got my foot in the door. I have published two literary novels and self-published crime fiction. I worked as a film/travel journalist and have reviewed crime fiction. I have a master's in film and have worked in the film industry; I recognize a good story when I see one.
I want to build your manuscript up and develop its strong points. You can count on me to clear the path for your creativity and success.
I look at plot, characterization, tone, tension, dialogue, structure, chapter-length ( beginning and ending points), continuity, rhythm, and target audience. I will find inconsistencies.
They picked my first manuscript out of the slushpile; I will give you tips on how to grab the editor's or readers' attention with your opening chapters. If you like, I can help you with your submission letter.
I love my fellow authors and am a voracious reader; it'll be my pleasure to work together.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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FAQ
Do you offer discounts for returning customers
Yes, I do. I love my regulars, so please get in touch with me if we have worked together before for special offers
Is there a genre you don't read?
No, I love reading absolutely everything.
531 reviews for this Gig
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X xenabern
Repeat Client

France
Like last time, Simona dazzled me with her professionalism and her eloquence, in addition to her quick responsiveness and punctuality of delivery. Her intelligence and wide range knowledge are exceptional. I feel very fortunate to have found her to give an in-depth analysis and insightful critique of my writings.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W willie_rose
Repeat Client

United States
Simona’s understanding of what I was trying to say without me telling her upfront is nothing less than exceptional. And I’m purposefully not saying much about it in the offer. I don’t think she understands how much that means to me, and I’m going to continue ordering going forward. Wonderful feedback and insight. Next time I’ll send a deeper cut.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T 
tapuziel
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Simona was an absolute delight. She was proactive in asking what I needed from the review, and was very flexible in dealing with my requests, even after the order was submitted. The feedback I got was very detailed and precise, and did not shy away from poking at the pain points in the novel. I cannot recommend Simona enough.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?X xenabern
Repeat Client

France
I couldn’t believe how lucky I was to have found Simona —her in-depth knowledge on the subject I was writing astonished me, and made me blush. But instead of making me embarrassed, she was extremely positive and encouraging for my clumsy attempt. It was perhaps a stroke of luck that she happened to come...
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?M 
mikaylab143

United States
Simona went above and beyond with my project. I want to sincerely thank her for her dedication to her craft and her attention to detail in my story. I didn't know what to expect going in, but I am so grateful and pleased with the outcome. Highly recommend, especially for inline comments. Thank you, Simona!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
531 reviews for this Gig
| (522) | ||
| (9) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
X xenabern
Repeat Client

France
Like last time, Simona dazzled me with her professionalism and her eloquence, in addition to her quick responsiveness and punctuality of delivery. Her intelligence and wide range knowledge are exceptional. I feel very fortunate to have found her to give an in-depth analysis and insightful critique of my writings.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W willie_rose
Repeat Client

United States
Simona’s understanding of what I was trying to say without me telling her upfront is nothing less than exceptional. And I’m purposefully not saying much about it in the offer. I don’t think she understands how much that means to me, and I’m going to continue ordering going forward. Wonderful feedback and insight. Next time I’ll send a deeper cut.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T 
tapuziel
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Simona was an absolute delight. She was proactive in asking what I needed from the review, and was very flexible in dealing with my requests, even after the order was submitted. The feedback I got was very detailed and precise, and did not shy away from poking at the pain points in the novel. I cannot recommend Simona enough.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?X xenabern
Repeat Client

France
I couldn’t believe how lucky I was to have found Simona —her in-depth knowledge on the subject I was writing astonished me, and made me blush. But instead of making me embarrassed, she was extremely positive and encouraging for my clumsy attempt. It was perhaps a stroke of luck that she happened to come...
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
S 
Seller's Response
Helpful?M 
mikaylab143

United States
Simona went above and beyond with my project. I want to sincerely thank her for her dedication to her craft and her attention to detail in my story. I didn't know what to expect going in, but I am so grateful and pleased with the outcome. Highly recommend, especially for inline comments. Thank you, Simona!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
