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I will provide professional script feedback and analysis
About this Gig
I'm a UK-based script analyst with a psychology degree and experience working with filmmakers, screenwriters, and content creators.
I specialize in script feedback that focuses on what's working (and worth protecting) before addressing what needs tightening. Every project gets fresh eyes, honest feedback, and actionable notes.
What I analyze:
- Story structure and beat progression
- Character motivation and arc development
- Pacing and emotional peaks/troughs
- Dialogue clarity and authenticity
- Visual storytelling and scene transitions
- Theme integration and payoff
I've worked with producers developing short films, YouTube creators building documentary channels, and novelists refining manuscripts. My approach combines structural analysis with character psychology to help you strengthen your story without losing what already works.
Deliverables include:
Written feedback report covering key story beats
Character analysis and motivation notes
Pacing recommendations
Structural suggestions (what to protect vs. what to tighten)
Fast turnaround. Clear communication. No generic notes.
Based in Dorset, UK.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What type of scripts do you review?
I review short films, pilots, feature screenplays, web series, and documentary scripts. I work across genres including drama, thriller, sci-fi, fantasy, mystery, and psychological fiction. If you're unsure whether your script fits, just message me before ordering.
What will I receive in the feedback report?
You'll receive a detailed report covering story structure, character arcs, pacing, dialogue, and themes. I identify what's working and provide actionable recommendations for strengthening areas that need attention.
Do you provide line-by-line editing?
I focus on structural and developmental feedback. Standard and Premium packages include sample line edits to demonstrate improvements. For full line editing, message me for a custom quote.
Question: How quickly can you turn around feedback?
Basic: 2 days | Standard: 3 days | Premium: 5 days. Express delivery available for an additional fee. Check Gig Extras for rush options.
Can you help me rewrite my script?
This gig is for feedback and analysis, not rewriting. I provide clear notes on what to strengthen and how, but you implement the changes. For script doctoring services, message me for a custom project.
